by dangerouslydead
On a much repeated theme. If the latest Google info is not wrong there is about a 20% chance of catching HIV on the first intercourse. If she immediately washed herself out the probability would go down. Of course if they did anal then the chance is more like 50%. We all have the right to our fantasies, though.
Liked you story, quick and entertaining. It should please all the "torch the bitch" crowd as this could be the ultimate revenge. It's just a story folks so cut the author a little slack. Nicely down, shows a lot of thought and a good imagination. Keep up the good work.
Didn't quite get the very last couple of lines thought. They don't really make sense to me. Perhaps the author could have kept going for a couple more sentences to make his meaning clear.
Overall I like it though, keep up the good work!
Tyr
The transgressor punishes herself. Very neat. A death sentence seems a little harsh but that's what is at risk these days. She's not only a whore, she is stupid.
I have followed your stories on SOL and I am glad you now write on LIT. This story was short and to the point. Very well done. Should we feel sorry for the wife or soon to be ex-wife? I don't think so. Anyway keep the stories coming.
Very nice twist my friend. Look forward to more of your tales. Soon I hope.
I really appreciate this story... Please write more in this manner!
Incomplete, lacked depth and detail of characters. Give up "Flash" stories they are only good for synopses, not for lazy authors attempting to pass them off as a real story. You seem to have a good imagination, use it!
...but the probability of male to female transmission
of HIV from one instance of vaginal intercourse given
she's otherwise healthy, no open sores etc. from
another STD for example, is more on the order of
1 in 1000.
for USA suburban community where I believe the story took place, though it is interesting to note that 1 in 100 is more likely in African countries. I was lazy, and remembered that the probability of transmission was low! The story seemed based a 100% transmission rate, an idea which I wished to disabuse. But I admited to the fantasy aspect of the story and I admit that I invented my first comment.... But now I have looked at various CDC reports and seen that the probability of punishment is much lower than I imagined...
Sorry!
I enjoyed the storyline and found it to be very just. Thanks for the quick little read.
Sometimes it's just what the reader needs
Albeit, a bit drastic, that is exactly what a woman who would cheat on her husband with his best friend, in his own house, richly deserves.
2 different writers and the faithless woman that killed herself.
That was fucking great......it was the funniest story ever........lol
However, the risk is much greated from a man to a woman than from a woman to a man.
Regardless, she is certainly very afraid and it will be months, perhaps a year before she knows for certain that than she didn't get HIV infected. Just the fear is a horrible punishment.
The story is far too short for 5***** so I have to deduct 1 or 2 stars.
this was a quick witted tale of a cheating soon to be dead slut. nice tale
because DWeeb DWornock thinks size matters in these matters.
flash forward, whore dies, man remarries, lives happily ever after. Heh heh heh!
I wish you would have put your name to your comment, I would thank you personally.
Story itself is below par for 2*.
Nice story; and again Tazz317 proves he or she is a shit head. Can you even read?
What is wrong with Tazz????
O, I know, although with all the abrevs he uses he is the only one who knows what they mean so we can pretent if he is nuts or not???
bill
Incarnate justice - harsh and fitting - wow - it is actually not too likely she would get infected that quickly - but you never know and fear is a killer - if she did there is plenty of hope nowadays with retro-viral treatment and such but it is harsh and scary and expensive - and she deserves what happens next.
To share his HIV status for no particular reason should not have been necessary - of course - gratx bitch. LOL Karma just ain't that linear though.
This is just too funny!!! The sad thing is that this has probably happened to someone at some point. Truth is stranger then fiction, hahaha. Please don't stop!!!!
Research at Johns Hopkins Medical has shown that you can stab yourself repeatedly with an HIV infected needle, and your chances of getting AIDS are, while possible, still remote. In any event, adultery and unfaithfulness are capital offenses? Look if she doesn't love you enough to stay faithful, leave the bitch. You're better off without her!
Over two billion people think that adultery and unfaithfulness are capital offenses.
Read the Quran.
Read the Hebrew bible.
Understand that there are many people that take those seriously.
who controls everything, does not mean others need to conform to such childish notions.
Religion is personal, do not use it to further your own morality thrust down others.
Adultery & faithfulness ARE NOT ILLEGAL, but widely accepted as immoral.
if Juliet was not happy, all she had to do was just tell her husband & either work on it, or move on. her wanting to have her cake & eating it too is a clear example of an immature person, being selfish is also not illegal but considered a cornerstone of immorality.
Have you looked at a sine wave, its the universes answer to balance out the uncertainty inherent in all systems, the universe(all known & unknown matter) cant differentiate between good or bad(actually, creative or destructive), but the solution lied in shifting the balance power between the dual forces.
Okay apart from my crazy ideas, there exist a duality in all living beings. but that is only to balance out the uncertainty. i strongly believe most people are selfish immoral & naughty monsters, but when it may really matter they usually surprise us all by showing real compassion & kindness, mathematically i believe that number is 98%, the 1 % of all humans are just purely evil, & the Final 1% are truly the undecernable, by that their existence may be unknowable
.... people will make mistakes, people can either choose to learn or drown in their mistakes.
Short but BOOM! Like a short fuse on a mountain of dynomite! 5 stars!
It is at my house, on both sides of the bed. Nuff said.
WTF WOW !!! Didn't see it comin'. *****
I wish there would be a full blown 'category' for Bitch Burning Herself like in BTB
It is just out there with Karma Is A Bitch ! Ha Ha. !!! More please...
Yes, you said it all. Cheaters lose and non-cheater wins...or I guess survives. It would have been nice if the husband set this up, but I guess you have to read between the lines. Thanks for a entertaining and karma-esque story. (I don't think that's a real word but it fits so nicely.)
We can only hope the slut contracted the virus. Then our hero can divorce her and accuse her of attempted murder upon himself because she was sleeping around beforehand no coming back to his bed so she surely would have done the same after fucking his friend. No way she gets anything in the divorce and she dies to boot!! Sweet.
What I like is that even though it is very unlikely that she got the virus she is in a world of fear and pain until she knows for sure. She gets some punishment whether she caught something or not.
I did not see that coming. Short and to the point, with a right sharp twist at the end. A real sting in the tale. It reminds me of that TV series from way back, "Tales of the Unexpected".
Fabulous.
5*
The perfect way to find out if your wife is a cheater... a way where she's guaranteed to regret it. (You can bet that this has been done)
I wish I could give this one ten stars.
And everyone knows those closet cucks can't get boners!
i can`t think of a better consequence for a cheating spouse than this
You need someone to help edit these stories. I understand you're from another country but this reads like I'm talking to someone whose English is a second language. Very difficult to read. Nobody talks like this. For example - there are no "mega beautiful babes".
Terrific, maybe unintentional revenge. That whore got done twice . As a medical professional, I know I shouldn't laugh at giving someone a deadly disease, but it's fiction.
Oh come on for f*cks sake! The real elephant in this room is that even in 2010 there were medicines that kept AIDS patients from infecting others! I think they're called inhibitors. The mere fact that Joe isn't deathly ill and in hospital suggests that he is already on such drugs. Therefore the risk of infecting the slag will be virtually none.
The rest of the story wasn't particularly good either. We're given almost no background about why this happened, only some vague words about equally vague rumors.
It's a BTB flash story, for fuck's sake, and all that crap you went on with... I'd bet it's still possible she could at least get it. For all the bullshit the medical establishment says, they still get alot wrong. Everybody knows that.
Good fun
We have been 26 years having pretty good sex life I normally had some bed talks with her and response was huge orgasm from her side we have two beautiful daughters of 12 and 17 when she got in wantedly pregnant for the younger one we got alarmed and tried to abortion my wife is slitely curvy with very good figures
By the time I was an engineering graduate and knowing a doctor friend from the university ,,I seemed his help to perform the abortion which was in the early day of gestation my friend accepted to take care of it on private office since it was not allowed by the government by the time ,I was busy with my projects after introducing my wife to him ,he. Scheduled for some pre operation exams so she had to visit him few times
Days passed and her visit of his office went on for some weeks and happened with out me being present
Whenever I asked her how it was going she just said she is being prepared and on my surprise our sexual activities was Demi I she day by day which I took it normall foyer condition ,one day I was out of work due to some deficiencies I went home few hours earlier my doctor friends car was parked imn my my parking when I opened the garage door to park my car ,so I parked out side and used out side door as I entered moaning had filled the whole hous ,I climbed up stairs it was my wife and my friend on her back pleasuring her
First blood rushed in my whole body but gradually turned to kind old excitement I watched their love making scene for a minute or two and slowly cropped out of house and drove away and until my wife did not tell me about few years later I kept it as a secret have to add she did not do abortion ,,
Her risk of becoming infected with HIV from a single act of vaginal intercourse would be about 1 chance in 250 if he had a high viral load at the time.
Dr Anonymous with his diagnosis of the story. It's fiction nimrod, there is no viral count.
And since this is a fiction story meant to entertain, and possibly teach a moral lesson, the probability approaches 1:1.
If friend has extra big cock (and of course he does. This is LW after all) then chances go up. And if she initiated anal sex her chances go to 1:70.
*** And this is assuming “average” viral load. Since Joe has full blown AIDS, his viral load is much higher than the average “positive” person, therefore her chances of contracting the virus goes up.
Of course Joe is experienced with the medical side of the virus, and would know about post-exposure prophylaxis (PEP) treatment. Which I’m sure, being a good Christian, he would tell Julie about.
***O***
If you cannot do a little “suspension of disbelief” then you should give a think through your “disbelief”. Perhaps you’re not as firmly grounded as you think you are