All Comments on 'It Went Very Wrong'

by trenchantone

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MBottomsMBottomsabout 14 years ago
I hope this is the beginning

I liked the story, but wanted it to continue... I hope you'll write another chapter...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
OMG!!

This story is so frickin hot!!! I can picture everything... those women coming up to me!! Man....whoa!!

More writing, please!

thepain_isminethepain_ismineabout 14 years ago
Very good.

I loved it. I read your other story first. I went to your submissions and found this one. I like the pace of your writing and enjoy your style. Please keep writing.

MacsmistressMacsmistressalmost 14 years ago
Ouch!

That would be a hell of a thing to have happen, even to a submissive!

justincbenedictjustincbenedictalmost 4 years ago
Dear God, you are talented!

The detail was glorious, though I don't think old women use the appelation "douche bag"

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