All Comments on 'Detroit'

Well darling, that was really stupid.

That's someting myself and my wife will try one day !!

That was a nice first story that you wrote together. I like how the wife and husband worked together with the bartender. I like how you were able to do show the love between husband and wife. There were a couple of typos but nothing major. I hope to read more from you in the future.

My wife and I have discussed this scenario many times. It is her top fantasy. Can't wait to have her read your story when she gets home. Let's hear more...

Really excellent story!!!