All Comments on 'Freeze! Don't Move!'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
DAMn!

You had me going there. He was so much screwed out of his pension and a job!@!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Load of Rubbish

The title says it all

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
LMAO

Good one!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
sexy and well written

You know how to weave a good story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
made me smile.

hehehhe

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

very nice :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Tricked me too.

I was totally surprised by the ending. He's got very thoughtful buddies on the p. force.

teach1965teach1965almost 14 years ago
Had me going!

I was beginning to feel like the guy was in deep s*** until the surprise ending. Great story. I gave it a 5. Right back atcha from teach1965.

baronearthbaronearthabout 13 years ago
chop suey and panties!

hi

really enjoyed this sexy and mirth making - keep them coming

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Your Character Doesn't Need a Woman...

Because he is a Woman. Bitch, Moan, Whine! What a ponderous load of crap just trying to get through the first few paragraphs.

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