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imurddyimurddyabout 14 years ago
sudden end

I loved this story, but the ending leaves me wanting, wanting to know how it ate her, to feel her terror, the anguish, one body part at a time. Maybe it starts at the feet and works it's way up!

sadlittlelostboysadlittlelostboyalmost 14 years ago
Please, bring us Alice Amoeba!

It has been a little while, but I've just rediscovered this, a really great story.

Please, keep writing ...

PapaPalpatinePapaPalpatineover 6 years ago

I like how this intelligent blob decided to enjoy her (and in its own twisted way, pleasure her) rather than immediately digesting her like most blobs would have.

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I live in Washington state. Aspiring writer, mostly a hobby now. I like off beat humor, weird things, sci-fi, fantasy, horror. Mostly inspired by B-movies, Roger Corman, old school pin-up girls, and Greek and Renaissance sculpture and art.