All Comments on 'Kita'thalla Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
still going strong

Your story is still strong and very well written. I like the characters and the why the are iterating very believable. Awesome job. mechmanas

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
another good chapter

man are you doing great with this story, if anyone starts complaining any time soon about no sex itll probally because the guy hasnt raped the cat yet. with the way you are writing this story sex at the wrong time could RUIN THE WHOLE STORY, so please continue as you are and this will end as the great story it is now

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
veyr nicely done

so far your story IS developing very nicely . . and it is very refreshing to see the cultural contrasts you have shown between the two characters . . she is not just another human wearing a fursuit . . . very well done :-)

DaniellekittenDaniellekittenalmost 14 years ago
Excellent Story

Perfectly paced and with a very strong voice. Looking forward to the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
This is FUN!!

I'm loving the character development-the bickering-getting to know one another!!

Phhhttt! SEX-SMEX!!

The brain is an organ too, keep it coming!!

Ahem....Next??

:-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Intriguing

looking forward to the next installment

ScarletKScarletKalmost 14 years ago
Well done!

A faint yelp, eh? Did our naked war goddess catch something for dinner? Can't wait to find out...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

I agree with the other comments. I like the story you are telling. Thankyou.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
More.

There must be more. And faster.

You make me want to get back into writing...

Kman4Kman4almost 14 years ago
Nice so far

Nice to see a high quality sci-fi story! keep it coming!

HerservantboyHerservantboyalmost 14 years ago
AWESOME!

Absolutely awesome, well written and loving the character dynamics! I agree with others here.. sex at the wrong time will just turn this into a second rate story. I know how hard it is to write, but PLEASE keep going - it's worth waiting for :)

The brain is the very best sexual organ and you're stimulating it wonderfully :)

.. and as I said for Ch. 2.. morrrr.. morrrr..morrrrrr :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Great Story

Well written. More please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
excellent

excellent i love it

VictorDoUrdenVictorDoUrdenabout 13 years ago
More and more interesting

I just pretty much have to say what Herservantboy.

Well paced and enticing. I would like to hear a little more on what their surroundings look like.

VictorDoUrdenVictorDoUrdenabout 13 years ago
Quite enticing

I just pretty much have to say what Herservantboy.

Well paced and enticing. I would like to hear a little more on what their surroundings look like.

VictorDoUrdenVictorDoUrdenabout 13 years ago
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Sorry about the double comment. Page crashed and I did not think it was uploaded.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
C-C-C-COMBO BREAKER

But in all seriosnes this is awsome

WarfolomeiWarfolomeiover 12 years ago
Goody

Nice work on keeping it entertaining

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Speaking of names...

What with all of this talk about the importance of names, it was only natural that I looked up (what the Internet would have me believe is) the meanings behind the names of the good Mr. Medic.

Eric (supposedly) comes from an Old Norse name, Eiríkr, which is derived from the elements ei "ever" and ríkr "ruler". So that's kinda interesting.

But the real fun is in knowing that the name Connor can be traced back to a Gaelic name which means (wait for it...) "dog lover" or "wolf lover." Gotta love it when that happens.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Multisyllabic names for the alien; another Borrow from Larry Niven's Man x Kizin wars

That said story development is very good.

in Nivens world's, a weakling Feline alien male Kizin; captures and falls in love with a Human female Space Navy officer

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Love the story keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
On the topic of seconds and minutes

The civilization who invented the minute and second had a number system that added a digit every 6 numbers 0,1,2,3,4,5,10,11,12,13,14,15,20,21,23,24,25 etc. which means that 60 was a very easy number for them to represent.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Wow

Awesome

TomdullyTomdullyabout 1 year ago

so far your doing good

AverageRedAverageRed3 months ago

Shas'slo h?

You left our the blue skin and lack of nose.

NICHOLXNICHOLXabout 1 month ago

Well written, loved it. voted five.

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Yep, I'm really back after such a long hiatus. The last 10 years have been a journey for me, including a new career change, several moves, and new experiences that have shaped who I am. I know I'm going to get a lot of questions about the state of Kita'thalla. This is still...

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