All Comments on 'Storms Never Last Ch. 02'

Jake, your stories are what we use to judge the other ones by. You set a standard few come near.

I truly enjoyed your story, and am anxiously waiting for the rest.

Ok, Good Buddy, let's get the next chapter out a little sooner. LOL I need to know who Terry ends up with. Is Anne really dead? Is Millie the new woman in his live. Let's get to writing the conclusion or at least get the next chapter posted. haha

Your friend

DG

The author writes well and has a rich imagination. It is hard to believe that Anne is gone and that they did not have a child. Now, the one time he made love to Acey he hits the jackpot. The question is, what to do about it. Will Acey be willing to have the child and form a loving couple with Terry. I have the feeling we have another storm coming...

You better not be too long on the next episode!!!!!!

Jake, I never noticed it before in my previous reads of this story, but in page 2 you mentioned the "Calvaryman Restaurant" in Laramie. Could it have been Cavalryman? There would seem to be quite a difference -- one is a hill, the other takes one.

Loving this story but there are a couple of bumps in the road. The main characters needed more than a year to recover from his; more realistic in the story. Second, ACEY is a pretty save girl and would not have screwed up on the BCP. It just not fit her character.

Other than that an awesome story.

Great imagery and setting accuracy. Can't put it down!