One of the most realist submissions on Anal I've read here.
Awaiting the next chapter.
I'm waiting to see if you asserted yourself with "Kim".
I'd say you did given your nature, as was glimpsed here.
You (the reader) actually feels for this woman.
Wonderful pretty much says it all.
One seldom reads stories that are as urgent and real as this. I thought Part one was amazing, but this is incredible. We learned the characters in Part 1, so the writer was able to concentrate on the action in this section. And how!
The final line was utterly perfect. Thank you for a most arousing read.
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