All Comments on 'Caroline Our Cleaner'

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sexmatesexmateabout 14 years ago
A very believable story!

Nice!

Thanks for writing!

BoxcarbillBoxcarbillabout 9 years ago
Good Read...

however it seemed a little rushed. Take her to the shower or the tub and softly bathe her and work her into a frenzy.. Not criticizing!!! You're the writer. Good job.

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