by femmed
You are an amazing writer...WOW...I'm blown away. Please keep up this INCREDIBLE literature!
but couldn't get through the middle, it upset me so bad. don't get me wrong here, it's a good story, I love dominant women, and being dressed up to play, but there is so much missing in this relationship to give that much trust to an adolescent female. he has at least 3 more years to go in that college, and she already has a pic of him. he has to realize how vulnerable he his, why does he continue? there is absolutely no commitment from her of discretion, or even secrecy, and forget love. it doesn't take much thought to getting out of any chastity device, at least none I've seen or tried. its a good story I guess if your a girl, but If your a sub you have got to have some common sense. he is a college student, he has got to have some brains.
I like this even more! Wow! Such nice touches. Realistic and not too over the top.
Well done!