All Comments on 'Having a Babysitter Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Excellent work...good descriptive writing...

Love this series - keep it up!

don87654don87654about 14 years ago
Shoot it in her

You need to make a new baby in her and move her into your home soyou can fuck her more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Fantastic Series

I usually dont get into series, but this one is pretty good. Has me thinking what next? Does Sara's Mother see the stains and come onto the Dad? Does Sara bring a friend? Im not suggesting, just wondering because youre ideas have me hooked so far. No I gotta get rid of some wood before I can leave my office.

Good job!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Having a Babysitter Ch.

I agree the story is hot.There is nothing better then young tight pussy to fuck and knock up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
So the trusting, faithful wife is repeatedly betrayed

by a slut of a husband who can't keep his dick in his pants. And everyone says the story is wonderful ... but, if the sexes were reversed in the loving wives category, there would be so many crude insults. Double standards or what?

baranbratbaranbratabout 14 years ago
To the last comment. Why read on this website!!

If you are so turned off by wife cheaters, why are you reading erotic material on this website. HELLO!! That's what guys do when presented with that opportunity, especially when the author is writing sexy and my I say very hot stories. If you want tame stories, try the Disney library. mattchat33 keep up the great work and don't let assholes like that stop you from writing more stories, just like this one

escape_wit_lit9escape_wit_lit9almost 14 years ago
Above comment

Damn right, baranbrat! Keep up the good work mattchat33!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Will there be a 4th chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
amazing

I loved how you write

please do a chapter 4

ramonbrookramonbrookover 11 years ago
Love Babysitter Stories

And this is one of my favorites! Would love to read more a out Sarah!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Oh so delectable

At least this time Mr. M. did something to please Sarah; yep, twice without returning the favor, bad boy!!

OK; small point, please don't use the same character names IF the the stories don't link up. It confuses your readers. This would appear to be the same Mr. M. from "Neighbors Daughter" which apparently was later in life, but the facts don't sync up. Married w/child versus Divorced but no mention of child!

DKP

Oatmeal1969Oatmeal1969over 9 years ago
fun and sexy

thanks for the quick read. like any good story, I wish there was more to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

So the lead character is a bit of a dick-head

(one whose thinking is mainly done with his dick)

Why not at least have him use a condom for obvious reasons and to prevent

suspicious stains?

Common sense seems to be in short supply with dick-heads.

ramonbrookramonbrookover 9 years ago
It seems like this

Was probably not the end of the babysitters stories. Hopefully you agree and at least put out chapter 4..

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Lucky

He was lucky her mum wasn't there to meet her as she was in the previous stories. The cum stains would have been a dead give-away if mum was behind her.

I haven't seen in any of these stories that the male had any concern at least until it was too late about where his cum went. They either cum in the girl, risking pregnancy [which only occurs when it is part of the plot] or making a mess. Why none of them switches to her mouth, giving her a chance to taste their pussy on his cock and him the feeling and sight of cumming in a pretty girl's mouth, especially a girl like Sarah, who thought his cum was tasty.

louise_lloydlouise_lloydabout 8 years ago
Hot Series

When I read Literotica stories, I do so knowing they are fantasy. That way, I ignore that he is cheating on his wife, being a bad role model for a teenager and never uses condoms. Putting that aside, all three chapters erotically show two hot, horny people enjoying sex.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
More

This would be awesome if you added a few more chapters

A_BierceA_Bierceover 6 years ago
Literotica? No. Smut? Yes.

The first installment was OK, she invited him, but the second and third were rape, plain and simple. Nope, I'm not looking for Disney stories, but he deserves not to be rewarded, but rather punished for his egregious behavior.

darkrage6darkrage6over 6 years ago
get over it

ignore the comment by the previous idiot, this is a good story.

ZakkkZakkkabout 6 years ago
hot!

I'd love additional chapters and stories with Mr Matthews.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Would love to see Sarah getting a baby with Mr. Matthews

chytownchytownover 4 years ago
Thanks***

For finishing it.

blackknight314blackknight314over 3 years ago

Huh, not a virgin. Hmm, Imagine that. At least he got her off. Someday his horniness is going to get him in trouble.

Thanks for sharing.

JohnDoe3151592JohnDoe3151592over 3 years ago
Quick notes...

1) he should've used a condom, both for (no duh) preventing pregnancy and (added bonus) avoiding mess.

2) she's not a virgin - or if she IS, you forgot the crucial detail of there being blood (or having her be asked, and provide some reasonable explanation - not that there are many for her.)

macisgreatmacisgreatover 3 years ago

Please write more, I love your writing style

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
This Guy Should Be Put Away!

This is just sexual abuse, not erotica!

squareybobsquareybobabout 3 years ago

Sexy interactions.

Small point about the plot: He forgot to call his wife and tell her how the baby was doing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I'm spoiled by this authors story series "comforting my neighbors daughter" !! He needs to slow down and then edit.

taco1085taco1085over 2 years ago

great story, would love to see it expanded.

IreneGoodnightIreneGoodnightover 2 years ago

Sexy story! When I started baby sitting I always had sex with the father….and I always made some great tips!

rape_ur_assrape_ur_assover 2 years ago

Stories aint bad, if a little far fetched - my only real criticism is the over use of the word 'cock'

At times in the series it feels like it's every third word. Use a different term, mix em up and you got a great story

Kiwi4everKiwi4everover 2 years ago

Well, they went the full way, she rang saying she had nothing to do, the last two times everything was OK for her

it feels she knew what she wanted and got it, where does it go from here? Time will tell

cynthia0920cynthia0920almost 2 years ago

a couple comments:

I know some people are skittish about writing underage stories but this one screams for Sarah to be a 14 or 15 year old with a naughty streak coming out as she experiences puberty

and Irene - I think you are hinting at that when you mentioned your babysitting days and having sex with the dad's - we would LOVE to hear your stories!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I would have liked it if he hadn't pulled out before he ejaculated. He should have cum inside of her warm wet tight cunt and continued to cum inside of her until she told him that she was pregnant

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

He never said that he took her virginity . Would have been better if that was brought in to the story . .Ianwants2cum.

dommasterjimdommasterjimabout 1 year ago

*5*... Incredible..!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Good style and details.

Curious to see how you’d throw in a surprise dive into her ass to initiate anal with Sarah, but not in a domineering or rough way.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Pretty hot... just a reminder, always get an affirmation of consent before any kind of penetration.

chad132chad1329 months ago

I like these as they are to the point and not drawn out as many stories are. Drawn out is great but sometimes it's nice to be short and sweet. I am sure these will appeal to most older men like me.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I enjoyed this story, it after while it seemed that Mr Matthews is a one dimensional boor who has no interest other than pleasing himself and staying out of trouble. His first night with Sarah is perplexing. She was insecure or antagonistic to going further. She was not a submissive, because she rejected his proposals. For an unexplained reason she was willing to be pushed around by him. In a way chad132 is exactly right. Without any plot to develop and resolve, you got right to the point of describing sexual encounters for solely prurient purposes. It is like porn, not story telling. In retrospect, Office Angel suffered from the same defect. Neither the author nor the main character demonstrated any sympathy or empathy for the captured woman.

buyuacoffeebuyuacoffee7 months ago

i was hoping that Sarah's mom would get involved. Call for Sarah but her and her father were away. Mom would come over but her car was in the shop. Pick her up and she would hint at some things that her and Sarah shared. The ride home would end up walking her to the door and being invited in.

IreneGoodnightIreneGoodnight6 months ago

Pretty good replay of what and how a lot of babysitters got to play with the men. I started babysitting around the age of 13. But I got wise after awhile and put out the that I only sat for single men when they had the children (divorced men are easy…they want to fuck and be sucked). And they pay good tips in addition to giving great sex and babysitting fees.

I fucked this one dad so many times that he asked me to move in. My parents, who didn’t care what I did, said ok. I became his mistress, fuck toy, and cumslut. He, and his three year old son, loved sucking my beautiful 34D tits. After I finished high school, I was to college…and that opened up a whole new genre of men to fuck.

Campus77Campus774 months ago

I would have liked the story to include Sarah's perspective. Did she understand how her behavior would result in more and more sexual content. From his side the desire overwhelmed him and looked a little selfish. None the less a story to remember.

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