All Comments on 'The One Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
FAB!!!

its been a long time coming but glad your continuing with the story. Update soon!!!

NikkiVredNikkiVredabout 14 years ago
**********

This is a ten star story even. i love it...dont make us wait for the next one too long

AllosaurusRexAllosaurusRexabout 14 years ago
Fantastic

Misted part one when first posted, so just desided to read part 1 & 2 at the same time, bring on the next part soom please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
nice!!

please don't take so long for the next update, this is so good!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Great stuff

Keep em coming!

catman71catman71about 14 years ago
hot

combustion at its highest level

luv_romanceluv_romanceabout 14 years ago
whoa!!!

wow!! 4 years before you continued this one? it was indeed a long time. good you are back. please update soonest!!! ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Beautiful

It is something to be brought up through the whole story from beginning to end. The teasing in your writing was driving me crazy. I loved it so much . thanks for writing this.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
hurry please

waiting impatiently for the next update! this story is so sweet.

MysteryMaidenMysteryMaidenabout 14 years ago
Loved it!

I loved these first two chapters. You wrote in a way that a reader could feel the immediate chemistry between the characters and made it ok that there wasn't a courtship first. Daniel is sexy as the aggressor, but I'm glad that Cat called him out on it as it creates more conflict and is, in my opinion, more realistic.She's attracted to his power and authority, but at the same time commands respect in her own right. I also love to write and I know that it's hard to tell when you're writing a love scene whether your reader can feel the sexual tension and whether you've struck the right balance of detail and description of passion. You've done a great job of creating sexual tension and chemistry here and your reader experiences it right along with the characters. I hope you keep going with this story - I'd love to read more!

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassalmost 14 years ago
Wow, way hot!

The heat factor exceeded the temperature limits--something is going to blow soon. I think we all know what it is. Good story. Please don't wait so long to complete Chapter 3.

EuphoriaSlam69EuphoriaSlam69over 11 years ago
Ooooooh I LOVE IT!

I love the intensity of it all!

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