by honeywldcat
its been a long time coming but glad your continuing with the story. Update soon!!!
This is a ten star story even. i love it...dont make us wait for the next one too long
Misted part one when first posted, so just desided to read part 1 & 2 at the same time, bring on the next part soom please
wow!! 4 years before you continued this one? it was indeed a long time. good you are back. please update soonest!!! ;)
It is something to be brought up through the whole story from beginning to end. The teasing in your writing was driving me crazy. I loved it so much . thanks for writing this.
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waiting impatiently for the next update! this story is so sweet.
I loved these first two chapters. You wrote in a way that a reader could feel the immediate chemistry between the characters and made it ok that there wasn't a courtship first. Daniel is sexy as the aggressor, but I'm glad that Cat called him out on it as it creates more conflict and is, in my opinion, more realistic.She's attracted to his power and authority, but at the same time commands respect in her own right. I also love to write and I know that it's hard to tell when you're writing a love scene whether your reader can feel the sexual tension and whether you've struck the right balance of detail and description of passion. You've done a great job of creating sexual tension and chemistry here and your reader experiences it right along with the characters. I hope you keep going with this story - I'd love to read more!
The heat factor exceeded the temperature limits--something is going to blow soon. I think we all know what it is. Good story. Please don't wait so long to complete Chapter 3.