All Comments on 'The Look, The Lure, The Longing'

This story has an odd. inconclusive ending for both spanker and spankee.

Actually, I don't really care who Flora is. I really liked the story! It had kind of a suspenseful, scary movie feel when he walked through the basement of the library, through the stacks. Even the ending held the same feel. I, too, wish the story were longer. BTW, your profile mentioned a pic, but I didn't see one. Too bad for me! Please keep writing.

This was very hot, but seemed a little rushed just before the end -- just where she says that she owns him, it needed a little more description there, before the announcement. Very well written, very well edited and proffer, too. I'll be looking for more of your writings soon. Thank you for this. Nice and spicy, with good mystery and just a little Noir.

But it was mean to leave me hanging like that. I wanted more, I needed more, both there as well as here.