All Comments on 'Karen's Revelations'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Great story.

Wonderful story, loved reading it.

BarelyJustBarelyJustabout 14 years ago
Wonderful Start!

Great premise and very well told. I look forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

Loved it to bits. Nice balance of realism and fantasy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
OMFG!!

This is one of the hottest stories I've read... thank you!

So believable and fun at the start, then merging into the story....OMG!

More please!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Couldn't finish it

You're telling a story, not showing it. Very awkward and dry.

playman64playman64about 14 years ago
Erotic

Nice erotic story.

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