by DoctorSintax
Again, thank you for the chuckles, sir.
this was hilarious with a deliciously twisted ending . . very well done
I gave it a 5. It reminded me of an account I once heard of a guy doing a ritual within a circle in his garage. The entities appeared, and one caused a phone on a counter outside the circle to ring. When the man reached out for the phone, he was vaporized... supposedly a true story... happened in Los Angeles.
I enjoyed this. It made me smile. I was expecting erotica, but you didn't need that here. You did well without it.