All Comments on 'The Sex Party Ch. 01'

Well, I tried it, didn't like it and moved on, no thanks and good luck.

Your story, if true, just reinforces the fact that swinging and an open marriage are not for me and my wife, and never will be. Why anyone gets hot having a wife like this is beyond me. Why would anyone want to stay married to such a slut? I thought being married was about respect and love you seem to have niether for each other. So goodbye and good luck. Just two jaded people who think swinging is a good idea.

Erik? Rob? 'fucking her from behind' and came all over her tummy?

May be a true story, but the laws of gravity still apply. Please get a volunteer editor.

If this event is true, you might want to consider fictionalizing it so it is at least interesting if not erotic in any way. Seriously. There's a reason why people write fiction. It's not as dull.

Interesting that one of the people who commented thinks we are terrible people and that my wife is a slut. He just can't imagine why any of this is attractive to anyone. Gee....what was he doing on Literotica reading these stories? Obviously a closet swinger. Don't you love the people who watch and read porn and then condemn it?

Note to all who read literotica. This is a mostly porn site. Don't read if you don't like it!

it's just the way they are made. As someone said I am glad I don't 'swing' or have an 'open' marriage. And don't worry your stories in the future will get a 1 star just because you object to readers giving feedback. And yes the sex may have been exciting at the time but from your writing it sounds boring. And next time put the stories in group sex or fetish i haven't read about a 'loving' wife in this story. But on the plus side at least you are not a Wimp Cuckold at least not yet.

No wonder you two fuck around, hope there were no kids, you made this a turn off.

Whorewife and voyeur is cuck and whore, not swinging. Hypocracy, your spelling is as bad as your writing. Hypocrisy is your word chuck.