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Indelible Stains

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by greenmountaineer03/19/10

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This is powerful. Assault, even sexual, happens more among people who know one another. The victim here is more disgusted than afraid. I liked your oblique references to those disturbing feelings.

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by greenmountaineer03/19/10

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I also liked what you did with the line breaks and syntax.

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by vrosej1003/20/10

Tough subject.

Well done. Like your weird line breaks. It disturbs the eye the way your subject matter disturbs the mind.

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by jenblossoms03/20/10

Powerful

Moving, and beautifully written. Well done!

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