All Comments on 'Chikan'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
loved story

I hope you write alot more of this type story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

lucky you

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

loved da story. i love feeling on older women with plump asses

xavierwxavierwabout 10 years ago
Almost a Five

I debated whether to rate this a 5 but in the end decided that the few technical problems - imcomplete sentences, a couple of typos, sudden, inconclusive ending, etc. - were enough to keep it at a 4. It's a HIGH 4 to be sure.

Please keep up the good writing and maintain the attention to detail you have here. It's a great story.

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