All Comments on 'Football Bet'

This was just trash, not erotic, really stupid.

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I liked the story. Keep up the good work!!

This has all the eroticism of reading a grocery shopping list. anon jerry

That is, it's very sketchy, lacks dialogue, and isn't very realistic. Besides that, it belongs in the Group Sex category.

In addition, one team fails to "scope." Did you proofread at all?

As I mentioned in another comment, this reads like a treatment to be given to a writer.

I gave up after the first few paragraphs. No wife in the world could be that stupid.

the Ct. Yankee

you made it into the top ten worst stories also top ten idiot writer, congrats.

Huh?

Come on over, watch a little football, drink some beer, eat some snacks,fuck my wife.

Now how could anyone turn down an offer like that?

Better yet, fuck watching football, lets just fuck your wife.

Good story, Thanks

Well, not as much mispeling in this story (deliberate misspelling). But poor construction.

You know this is an erotica site. You can say fuck and not F__k.

....a bunch of average Americans, booze and football? I think this has the makings of a true story.

Pretty terrible story, not really believable nor appealing.

it was short and I like that.. but it was too easy and not real. I mean a little more detail, and a maybe she should have not been so willing..

This was one of the worst stories I have ever read on here. You should feel bad for posting this.

Not to bad keep writing

from naked to anal sex, good up to that point. I luv being fucked in my ass, so I wish I could the husbad, and step from BJ jobs, to my ass fucked, to two cocks in her ass, thn mine of course

ass, then Vacum up the nectar from everyone her yummy anus

That was very sporting of you

No big loss, she was worth $5.00 at best.