All Comments on 'Oliver's Balls Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
So good!

Turned on by Leo's terrible power over you. At the recent x-mas party I was in the washroom with a colleague I can't stand. At the urinals the fat, little extremely assertive guy, younger than me, calmly showed off his surprisingly big penis. Having had quite a few beers i just dumbly and helplessly stared. The smug little fuck just laughed at me.

Back at work I seem to see his smirking face everywhere. He now intimidates me. I just feel disgust, shame and a weird arousal when thinking about him.

WickedWitch79WickedWitch79about 13 years ago
well

Another sad story. You have such rich imagination and strangely you use it so little. :(

donaldelliott11donaldelliott11almost 13 years ago
You need an editor

Many errors, including Jessie becoming Katie.

But such a hot story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wishitwereme

I love this, I have a small cock. 5 inches

talbert29talbert298 months ago

This was good until Jesse entered the scene. A dom female is just a big turn off in a gay fic.

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