All Comments on 'Lt. Gordon's Transformation Ch. 04'

Very creative DM.

I knew that was cumming,lol but it is good.

Saying hormones and estrogen is redundant. Estrogen is a hormone. You can say male and female hormones or, more specifically, testosterone and estrogen. The story is a bit slow, and you messed up certain details, such as Ensign Jody Price became Ensign Peters, who became Ensign Prince. I did give the chapters four stars for the overall story. I didn't allow the few issues I mentioned to detract from the overall story.