All Comments on 'Nosy Neighbor Ch. 03'

I somehow feel a buildup to a Kate happening, I hope. Keep up the good work.

keep them cummin

One of the hottest stories ever!!!!!

I loved the story but it was marred in places by poor grammar and spelling. With some polish, this could be an exceptional piece of writing.

grammar and spelling were fine

great story

I didn't realize this was a creative writing class project. I thought that there story were really exciting. Looking forward for the rest of the series.

The only thing I've noticed is incorrect words or leaving words out. An easy way to correct that is to read what you have written backwards. Then, the errors stick out like a sore thumb. Great story though.