All Comments on 'I Just Popped Out For Some Smokes'

I like the easy flow and unique story line. Unfortunately, it's too short to get me off, left me hanging in need of another script ... or a visit from your dentist. The ending indicated, hopely, that there might be more intense play in the future. Perhaps you have that sequel drafted - I'd be glad to proofread as encouragement to post more for your readers

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