All Comments on 'Seduced by a Stepdaughter'

Worth developing the story. Just how will Rick turn Michelle into his cum slut?

Looking forward to reading more.

Col.

PLEASE have someone edit/proof the next one.

Have the confidence to develop your next story more. The extreme cloths and changing outside the house weren't needed to establish her desire for him. The effect would had been much better if she had been desperate but sweet. Continue writing.

me n daddy will end up like this...if i have my way....ummmmm.im stacy18_bi@hotmail.com

If you're going to write erotica, *please* at least know the basic anatomy. A woman's hymen stretches across the vaginal opening. It is not inside, so you can't push into her and then come to a barrier. Hymen-fetish is fine, but you've got to know what you're talking about!

i loooveeedddd this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

But lately, Michelle was obviously "feeling her oats" as his father used to say. She wore skimpy clothing that didn't leave much to the imagination. He tried to talk to her about it, but it always ended in an argument with Michelle yelling, "you're not even my real father" or some equally hurtful comment until he dropped the subject.

@@@ Real father or not I have NO problem stripping your ass naked, turning you over my lap and spanking your ass until you cant sit down for the rest of the day! ...and before you go spouting off about calling someone if I spank you, just remember where they will probably put you if they took you away from me. Wherever it is, you'll be way more miserable. Now go change! @@@

"Did you actually wear that out of the house?" were Rick's first words to her.

"Yea, what business is it of yours?" was her retort.

@@@ its my business to beat your fucking ass if you give me attitude like that again! Quit dressing like a crackwhore hooker! @@@

"Please don't make me leave," she requested.

"But baby, this is no good for you, I'm an old man compared to you. You deserve someone your own age for your first time," Rick replied.

@@@ the way she dresses and acts Im surprised he even thinks shes a virgin! @@@

He paused for what seemed like forever, sighed deeply and said, "Okay, lay back and let me take care of you baby. Get you nice and ready for me." Rick softly ran the back of his finger across her already tight nipples.

@@@ well thats a super fast flip from his dodging, lol! ...at least hes not ragging on and being lame! @@@

As her nipples became tighter and longer. Christ! Her tits were perfect. Dark pink nipples extending from her firm breasts. They were as long and thick as the tip of his pinky finger. He couldn't wait to suck on them.

@@@ man! I LOVE long, poky nipples!! The only thing sweeter are puffies ;) @@@

He took his hard cock in hand and put it up to her hot, wet entrance. She immediately began to thrust upwards as if she couldn't wait. He pushed at the same time and forced the head of his dick inside her.

"Jesus, you're tight, baby. Quit thrusting your hips for a minute or I'm gonna cum inside you right now," he moaned.

He slowly began to work his shaft in and out, entering her a little more with each thrust. Suddenly he came to her barrier.

@@@ Oh GaWd, yet ANOTHER author that doesn't have a clue where the hymen is!! Argh, its an epidemic! On here!! :( @@@

"Oh, I love being covered in your come. I want you to make me your little slut and fuck me every day. Do you have a problem with that, daddy?" She asked him.

@@ I thought she wanted to be the new wifey! ;) hehehe! ...oh, almost forgot the cliche' mutual orgasm, hah! Well the story was ok I guess, rather short and abrupt and the storyline was a bit jerky, but still a good attempt on the first chapter! Thanks for writing! @@@

WOW, a very well written hot and arousing story !! I hope they keep it up and eventually Michelle sleeps in his bed all the time and they become a hot sex couple. Thanks !

One of my favorite fantasies. Only a shame I didn't have a daughter or step daughter to make my lil slut.