All Comments on 'The Síochán Ch. 01'

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Cedar_NeedleCedar_Needlealmost 14 years ago
One word...

HOT! This is awesome! I just love your mind and the way you spin stories. I see another amazing series ahead of us and can't wait for MORE!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
ummm

i like this one but i wish you would go back to the story about mara and demetri!!!! i cnt wait any longerrrr!! lol :b

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Excellent start

I enjoy all your stories - and this is no exception - although I have to agree, I am waiting (albeit impatiently) for more of Mara's and Demetri's story. You are a wonderful writer..

lostchickenlostchickenalmost 14 years ago
OOOOOOOO

Okay so this is going to be an interesting story i can tell. I like the twists at the end.

:)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
I am sure it great But

Im so hooked on Mara and Demitri please give another installment dont really like vamp stories but what can i say your talented. PLEASE go to mara and Demitri . please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Use of Irish.

Please do more research before using Irish, either language or folklore... as an Irish person and Gaelic speaker it's very hard to enjoy a story if there are annoying references or words used inappropriately. Great story though!

DaniellekittenDaniellekittenalmost 14 years ago
Excellent story

you are an amazing author. Every one of your stories is mind boggling and wonderful. I'm always in awe. Keep up the wonderful work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
LIke this...

...but I've yet to meet a naturally golden, curly haired person with naturally long, thick, *black* lashes, and since this is in the early 1800s, I'm guessing mascara wasn't readily available. Sort of yanked me out of the narrative. Still liked it, though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Blonde with Black Lashes, So What?

Your previous anonymous critic may be picky about this possible anatomical anomaly but, the story wasn't harmed by it. I find your story spellbinding ( pun intended). I love your clearly thought out characters and consistent attention to detail and continuity. I'm not even bothered with the grammatical errors I found, even those that got past your editors. Hey, we're all human (hehehe).

I love this story series and want to hear more.

^..^ Chuck

MizTMizTover 13 years ago
I'm Hooked

You have grabbed my attention in a big way. I almost didn't stop to add a comment I so want to get to chapter 2. My comment "I'M HOOKRD"

apollonaapollonaabout 13 years ago
Nice!!!

Great effort here author! Brilliant start to something different. I'm loving it.

coffinbaitcoffinbaitover 12 years ago
Please Continue

Please tell the rest of Summer and Nathaniel's story!!!!!

secretitosecretitoover 12 years ago
*WHEW*

What a way to get a girl all hot and bothered. Nothing wrong with a few less hours of sleep...onward!!!!

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
A SLEEPER ASLEEP, FOR HOW LONG AND WHERE

will there ever be a reckoning, a revival. TK U MLJ LV NV

PeepItPeepItover 11 years ago
This is FANTASY at its best!

All insipid quips and criticisms on non-essential shit aside....thank you for the FANTASEEEEE Sensai! A story well told and well started, not a damn history lesson or science text people....It's YOUR universe JZC and etc...etc...etc... !!! Xp

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Good

Good story but end is weird.

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66about 10 years ago
Interesting

I wonder if this is one of the reincarnations of Callain and Ana? I liked it and am now onto the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
A great read!

I've actually finished the series (in one sitting), but I returned to comment and rate the first chapter as well. This chapter was good as well, but I moved on to chapter 2 before I had to stop to comment.

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