All Comments on 'Just So Elephant'

by oggbashan

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littleblackdress50littleblackdress50about 14 years ago
Nice job, O' best beloved.

The best beloved writer on lit has done it again!

AzPilotAzPilotabout 14 years ago
On average, about three chuckles per paragraph plus a five star rating.

Thank you sir, for a fun read.

Cedar_NeedleCedar_Needleabout 14 years ago
Very clever!

Thank you for sharing your wonderful story telling with us! It was entertaining to the last word!

Renags21Renags21about 14 years ago
Fantastic!

Your writing is superb and the whimsical rhythm of the paragraphs and sentences is delightfully entertaining.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Poor Kipling,

but brilliantly done, right down to the mannerisms of his writing style!

V_AlcazarV_Alcazarabout 14 years ago

As someone who is terribly fond of those stories, this brought me a fine chuckle.

DG HearDG Hearabout 14 years ago
Now that was differet

...and I learned a few things. Don't give elephants donuts. Thanks for the smiles Og.

DG

Handley_PageHandley_Pageabout 14 years ago
Pure Magic.

Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Great

Brilliantly done, Ogg. Loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

Great story!

NaokoSmithNaokoSmithalmost 10 years ago
Exceedingly Good

Ogg, you are hilarious and always a great treat to read. =D

GuessImJamieGuessImJamiealmost 5 years ago
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A funny thought occurred to me reading this adorable offering: what if this WERE the original draft submitted by Rudyard to 'Ladies Home Journal' in 1900.

(IIRC Olive Byrne was editor there but much later, JMO she would have liked it.)

Jamie

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Can I now change bio? oggbashan was diagnosed as terminally ill and expected to be dead by June 2018. As you can see. I am still here. . As long as I can I will continue writing and posting on Literotica but there will be an end - soon. I don't expect anyone to like ALL of my...