Where does this story belong? Does Lit.com have a "snuff" category?
That is where this really belongs...certainly not anywhere near "Loving Wives". I am sure that there are some who get off on the killing of slut wives, and they deserve their own category.
That was different. Some slut wives just don't know when to quit do they? Nice ending. Far better than most.
it's less violent than some things cucks go through in some stories
This is the way most husbands would react when pushed this hard, pun intended. Different.
....now reload and nail the scum that would fuck a married woman.
... you start messing around with emotions and sex. If you had told me 30 years ago that people could be this stupid, to engage in sex like this and then think it doesn't mean anything, to just excuse it like they forgot to pay the electric bill, I wouldn't have understood it or believed that they could be so misguided. But I know that people can be this dumb. I'm not into gratuitous murder. She deserved to have her ass kicked. There is a high cost for betrayal and stupidity. But she really didn't act maliciously, just unbelievably stupidly. And then he did as well. He started by getting in line to fuck her. If he was really upset with her how dumb was that?
good luck in the contest
Cheating has consequences...but the death penalty is a bit drastic!
Sadly the story is close to real life and what happens a lot.
Good story telling, thanks.
What a buzz killer of an ending, thanks! Sounds like the writer has some unresolved issues with a past or current relationship.
Great ending - only wish that JPB, Angie and MattM's stories were even close to being somewhat being this realistic. The sorry bitch deserved it and probably enjoyed the "pain/pleasure" aspect of the ordeal. Well done, author [wish more authors had the guts to write decent endings like this]. Debra and Wayne
You portrayed the guy as too easy going, and he was going to forgive her.... then abruptly murder... didn't make sense given the characterization.
I wonder how many men are sitting on death row or servinge 30 years for doing the same thing for catching a cheating wife?
There are some things you just can't get over !
Watching your life flush down the toilet can have a real effect, and send you to a dark side where consequences for this kind of action don't mean shit!
Welcome to reality!
Thanks for writing!
A very cool story and yes I liked the ending!
he can finish the job after he gets out, no?
now the faithless bitch is one with the earth, worm kibble, maggot chow, etc.
good yarn 5*
Fucking cunt. That's what happens to an open cheating whore wife.
In fantasy anyway.
... I enjoyed the comments even more.
Finally a story that ends as I suspect many sudden discovery's do. If not murder; at least with a hellova beating.
Good for her to die...But all 5 men went away and he had gone to prison...That's not a good ending...If was to kill he should have killed all of them in the beginning...Go to jail but kill all the 5 cheaters...
And when I get out and I will, they are dead.
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