All Comments on 'If Women Ruled The World Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Continue, pls

This is fun, smart and a little scary. Most inventive I've seen here. Curious where you would take this...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
ummm ok

wow, this does sound like a backwards world. I agree with the first guy. Its sounds scary but a nice change from the typicall story. Although this 'sissy' life this character will have might make me a little pissed off. LOL, im not really into this whole emasculating stories. But overall, it was a good read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
very nice!

What a great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Oreally

WHY THE HELL I READ THIS CRAP.!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

What a ridiculous world.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Good start, thanks for the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

I just got to say one thong the world your building seems to contradict it in the beginning it said the school taught them "male pursuits: home economics, sewing, fashion and homemaking", "sissy" stuff but the exam seems to sagest that they want "bulls".

My point is this: why teach them these thing when they want the opposite?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Good but...

I like the idea but there are some contradictions. As someone commented before, why is being a sissy so bad when all activities boys learn at school are "sissy" related? And how could a man have as many wives as he wants in a female supremacist state??

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good

Other people said things contradicted. Whether it's valid or not is irrelevant. It's a fiction story with the purpose to arouse certain people. Personally, I liked how every female pronoun is capitalized. It shows attention to detail to what someone growing up in a matriarchal system would do.

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