by chronoxxx
This is fun, smart and a little scary. Most inventive I've seen here. Curious where you would take this...
wow, this does sound like a backwards world. I agree with the first guy. Its sounds scary but a nice change from the typicall story. Although this 'sissy' life this character will have might make me a little pissed off. LOL, im not really into this whole emasculating stories. But overall, it was a good read.
I just got to say one thong the world your building seems to contradict it in the beginning it said the school taught them "male pursuits: home economics, sewing, fashion and homemaking", "sissy" stuff but the exam seems to sagest that they want "bulls".
My point is this: why teach them these thing when they want the opposite?
I like the idea but there are some contradictions. As someone commented before, why is being a sissy so bad when all activities boys learn at school are "sissy" related? And how could a man have as many wives as he wants in a female supremacist state??
Other people said things contradicted. Whether it's valid or not is irrelevant. It's a fiction story with the purpose to arouse certain people. Personally, I liked how every female pronoun is capitalized. It shows attention to detail to what someone growing up in a matriarchal system would do.