All Comments on 'A Strange Day Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Hope More is Coming

Really interesting. Oscar needs to do more for himself. In Chapt. 3 he looked into the mirror. Can he change himself? He needs to develop ongoing relationships with about three or more women.

ap2techap2techover 12 years ago
Very nice

Although strange, I like your story very much. Not like the typical mind control story. I'd like it continued of course just the way it's going. He's an every manlike most of us with average hopes and dreams.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
continuing?

are planning on continuing or is this the end of the story? I thought and hoped there was more.

ThepornwriterThepornwriteralmost 6 years ago
DANG

I need one of those!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I wish

I really liked this story and wished the writer continued this. Either way, I just want to write and tell the author what an amazing story and thank you

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I've been writing short stories and full length novels for several years. As a professional ISO auditor and consultant I create technical documents such as standard operating procedures and health and safety best practice sheets. It is in my spare time that I write fiction, ...

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