by yeti8080k
Wow! Usually I don't read 1-pagers--too short to build up a proper sizzle--but this was great! I hope you add more.
Shit! Usually one-pagers don't make me so hot, but this one.... And the way you write... Damned, you're great. You are now one of my favorite writers. This was very well written, and, I don't know about anybody else, but, it was actually believable for me. And I must excuse myself; I seem to be in dire need of some fresh air after your story.
-Soulless
This was a really great turn on. i love how the story rolls out. Please write a ch. 4. I will be looking foword to reading it as will other people hopefully. You have some tallent in writing and you should be proud of yourself, keep up the good work;}
So many of us have fantasized about doing it with our brothers, but dare not speak of that taboo. Congrats on writing about it with such a natural and easy flow. I'm sure it happens a lot more than we think!
Looking forward to reading the rest of the series when I'm back from work and ample time to edge myself silly