All Comments on 'Painting Donovan'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
more

Would love it if you had more to this story!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Wow

Super, duper hot! I loved it!

unlivelyunlivelyalmost 14 years ago
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Wow! Usually I don't read 1-pagers--too short to build up a proper sizzle--but this was great! I hope you add more.

arsenedyearsenedyeover 13 years ago
superb

You are so funny. and the length was perfect, too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Loved it!

Man, that made me laugh and turned me on

SoullessCynnerSoullessCynnerover 13 years ago
Holy Fuckin'....

Shit! Usually one-pagers don't make me so hot, but this one.... And the way you write... Damned, you're great. You are now one of my favorite writers. This was very well written, and, I don't know about anybody else, but, it was actually believable for me. And I must excuse myself; I seem to be in dire need of some fresh air after your story.

-Soulless

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Awesome

This was a really great turn on. i love how the story rolls out. Please write a ch. 4. I will be looking foword to reading it as will other people hopefully. You have some tallent in writing and you should be proud of yourself, keep up the good work;}

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

awesome

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
hell yeah

it's hot and sexy as hell.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

AMAZINGGGG

VBGayLordVBGayLordalmost 9 years ago
Brotherly Love

So many of us have fantasized about doing it with our brothers, but dare not speak of that taboo. Congrats on writing about it with such a natural and easy flow. I'm sure it happens a lot more than we think!

DevonCowboyDevonCowboyabout 3 years ago
Hot as fuck

Looking forward to reading the rest of the series when I'm back from work and ample time to edge myself silly

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