All Comments on 'Donna Carter Ch. 03'

by chunkyd1

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jwp6199jwp6199almost 14 years ago
Excellent build up and pacing.

Keep up the fine writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Excellent Story

Excellent story Keep it coming.

nadinephillipsnadinephillipsabout 12 years ago
Great job

Great job to you for the story and to Ed and Sam for fucking Donna silly. Sounds like beyond the confusion of how a barely dress "lady" wound up arousing two service men, that she fully enjoyed the afternoon. Maybe she needs a warranty call on the computer? Just tell her to go to www.virus.net to get a new virus that will need to be removed and then she can be "serviced" again and again.

Super job, wish I had been there to help out. Nadine

HardFeltHardFeltover 11 years ago
Wild Side

My ex has really big ones too. She had the same problem Donna has in this story only it was mostly with young ones.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
Think about your writing

I really do enjoy your stories apart from silly mistakes.

On site services no on sight.

He was in his forties not his forty's.

Etc etc

kivancsifancsikivancsifancsi10 months ago

Várható volt ez a folytatás. Kíváncsi vagyok mi következik.

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