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All Comments on 'Dana's Leak'

by justboycrazy

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
What Happened

You had a nice slow introduction going....ramping up to what I was sure would be an exciting encounter. Then all of a sudden, the story rushed right through the sex. Slow it down next time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Agreed

It started out great but fizzled out with the rushed sex.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Needs more development of the story. More detail. Put a little more thought and description into it.

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