by BlueEyes36D
That won't happen here, but thats why you should never try this for real.
I love this!! :) I can't wait for the next chapter! To that other comment made about jail...are you stupid? Seriously? Dumb thing to say.
Anyways! I can't wait for the next chapter!! Hurry please!
The only thing I want to add is to try and make the chapters a bit longer?? Pleaase?? Thank you!!!
Great job!
Great writing, great wording! Had me seeing it all as it happened. I do have to agree about possibly having the chapters longer. But they are great none the less. Thank you!
I was just wondering when you will be posting another chapter to this story? I've been waiting for the next one to be posted :)
LOVED both of these stories. Don't know how long i can wait for the next chapter...please please get back on and write!!
I think we definitely need more chapters of this one :-)
Ok, he backhanded her, but otherwise I like he isn´t too violent. Waiting for more! :)