All Comments on 'just a breath away'

Nice erotic poem, Mr. Fool.

I quite liked your narration. You have a nice voice, but what was particularly interesting is that how you pronounce certain vowels reminds me of another Kansas resident we both know. I don't think I would have noticed it except that she has read her poems too, and when you're listening to someone read a poem, you're more focused on sound than usual.

I assume that is some kind of regional accent mojo goin' on.

Or I'm daydreaming.

I like that wall thing. I'm big on walls.

Metaphorically.

I didn't know what to expect. I like the option to put more life into the words, which were good on their own btw. I think many others will like this.

I enjoyed hearing how you envision this, with your own voice and inflection, but I also love seeing how you choose to put the words down in print, and my own interpretation of this very erotic, well-done poem. Thanks, Fool.