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A Tale of the Late-Shift Librarian

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by ILienBagby05/11/10

listening

mt computer, for some reason, wouldn't play past the first few lines of the recording. Your voice certainly promised a wonderfully exciting listening experience. Forced to read (because recording just won't go any further), I found the writing quite good. Enjoyed reading the story. I hope you'll continue writing.

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by Anonymous05/11/10

Very Good, left me breathless

Extremely hot sensually read. Great seductive female voice and content.

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by rickman9905/11/10

Oh so very nice

Mmmmm, what a arousing story. I was hard by the second paragraph, lol. Well written and you do a great job with that sexy voice of yours. I look forward to reading/listening your future stories. Thanks for the hardon, keep up the great work.l

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by Anonymous05/11/10

Divine Voice

I read it, for I prefer reading to listening, yet I tried a brief selection of your recording and it was... eh... 'titillating'? Good writing, all around, and the constant use of 'you' is a unique stylistic choice.

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by Anonymous05/12/10

As a librarian, that is one fantasy I've always wanted to try!! Great writing!!!

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by ginge2109/12/10

I like the style of telling the story in the first person

I do wish authors would realise that people who read these stories for titillation would like a much longer and graphic description of the orgasm at the end of the sexual act

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by Anonymous10/29/10

This was a great story but would like a much longer and graphic description of the orgasm at the end of the sexual act

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by Anonymous02/19/11

Memories.

I love you Ginger!
Marry me!...='(

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by idle_dreamer03/22/12

Extremely hot, makes me wish I could have a naughty librarian. Just absolutely beautiful!

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by Latinlover1511/17/12

I need a towel I'm sweating so much ha

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by Anonymous03/05/13

thank you

What a sweet, gentle, and VERY erotic little story. I'm not usually keen on third person storytelling but you made it work so well. God! It's been so long since I was totally loved up like that. Thanks for reminding me what it's like.

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by talldarkfellow08/27/13

Excellent.

The descriptions of what the two lovers were doing to each other were very arousing and steamy. Doing the sexy librarian in her domain is a particularly juicy fantasy for me. Your voice also has a throaty quality that goes well with the subject matter.
One tiny issue: as compelling as your words and the timbre of your voice were, you tend to slip into a monotone when relating the story. Don't be afraid to drop a word or two in the narrative if it means you are really getting into the passions of the characters. As the author, you know who they are, on the most intimate level possible. Trust that knowledge and use the script as a guideline, not a lifeline.

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by BokaSyn7712/23/13

Near Perfection

I can't put my finger on it exactly of why this hot, steamy audio story is SO good. Your voice is delish, but your storytelling and pacing is brilliant too. The descriptions of the interactions are sublime.

I enjoyed this immensely, letting go abruptly at the end as described... Mhhmmmm.

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