by DontJudgeMe
Don't give up your day job as you can't write. First off for the world its "mom/mother/mama" not that junk "mum" which means remain silent/quiet. Then that pure garbage of "word ... word" or "word - word" in most sentences isn't even grade school level of an eight year old.
Good hot erotic sex between mother and son is always interesting to read.
I hope that you continue the dominant sex that the son has over his mum, and that she gives him anything he wants.
Thanks for the good story
your story made an enjoyable read. ignore that other anonymous feedback (isn't it funny when someone wants to talk about the "world" but doesn't know how English is used in England? (and other countries that realise when you're talking about an electrocardiogram you should call it an not an EKG.. but that's truly a seperate issue).
Keep up the good work!
Very good story. I hope that the mother is totally enslaved by her son, and punished for her bad behaviour.
I loved your story. Your descriptions made me feel like I was there. Will your son insist that his mom wear nylons for him (both on dates and in bed)? Keep up the good work.
I really like it so far. As a suggestion I think the son should incorporate
some bondage to further control his mother. I think she will like it.
Keep it in the mothers purspective.
I enjoyed this, please keep it up and yes mom should be more controled and maybe pirceings? Look forward to more, I felt as though I was the mom, being banged ten ways till Sunday. Hot!!!!
Liked the way you took her. Bring it up a notch, can't wait till next chaptor
I agree with Poorgirl19. Piercings would be nice. A firm collar, nipple piercings and a tatto above her sex... Oh My!
Yes I agree that there should be piercings perhapse with a ring in her clit and she should admit in public that she is he sons. Perhaps his friends will see she belongs to him.
I really love this story, and have no idea how I could have missed it for so long. Please continue!
I would love to see her shared by her son and a bunch of his mates!
This story is utterly fabulous, I love it to bits. You can't be serious about finishing it here, there's so much more that can happen yet. Another chapter please!! Maybe the son could breed his slut mother, certainly his friends need to fuck her repeatedly.
I really enjoyed the way he turned her into a complete slut, maybe she could wake him up after a while with some oral? I was thinking it would be very interesting to see him turning her into a complete slave, collar and everything.
Now that he and his Mom now their Roles he needs to train her and have her bring Friends home from work,clubs, wherever and add to his Harem.
You are an excellent writer and intellectual thinker. Yes, we will absolutely judge you and what we say is "you are one of a kind and make this story another classic"
This series is really fucking hot! Would very much appreciate another installment!
you could have the next story take place on his 21st b-day. mom takes him to a bar and have him show off what a slut she as his girl friend is and how much he owns her.
The most amusing thing about stories like these for me is the total disconnect from anything resembling a real concern. Obviously they live in the tropics. Despite the son wearing a jacket, with the wardrobe he's permitting her to keep, she'd die in a climate where there was a real winter. I also think it's funny that despite being too young to have any marketable job skills, the son leaves the house everyday and mom stays home, yet they have enough money to pay their bills, eat and do all those other things that people normally direct the lion's share of their energy toward. Lucky bastards.
The sex was hot, so I gave a decent rating, but I couldn't resist yanking your chain.
Thanks again and keep writing. To the naysayers.... I see most of you don't write anything. Some people are doers and others are dreamers
Naysayers are neither one so shut the @%@* up!!!!
My own mother like this is long gone but sure wished I could find a nice older woman like this one. Literotica is a fantasy sight after all and I appreciate the opportunity to read the stories of my liking..
Doing things you are not capable of . 1* .
Maybe me knowing that and still asking gives it some idea of sincerity?
Perhaps 10 or 15 more?
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Very good writing. Its been awhile but I would like to read more chapters
sounds like you are really loving what your son is doing , to you an for you. I think you should carry on ,from mom view of what is happening . I'm lovin it,
I just read both chapters and enjoyed them immensely. I think you should continue and perhaps have the son pimp his mother out as his own whore.
Have him take her out in public and treat her like his plaything
And you told it well. I've read both stories and am commenting here. Next chapter should have more planning on the son's part. This has all be spur of the moment and now he needs to plan further for his mom. Testing her limits and pushing them.
Very enjoyable read, though really needs to breed her as well, perhaps he should be bringing in another woman closer to his own age to cover up what is happening as well.