by DreamerIncolore
You, my friend, are something very special. Please keep writing: I would offer helpful criticism if I could find anything to criticize!
This is more fulfilling than the cum-soaked and orgasm-dependant styles of 99.99% or the writers here (including myself)- this is like.....good enough to pay for kind of stuff!!!!
PLEASE keep writing.
And I am going to have to put some stilettos in my next story- you make them sexy for someone who didnt see/feel/grok the whole scene.
That takes talent!
And I love your technique of making the journey to the sex the whole story- as the previous commenter mentioned; the rest of us have to use ooh's and spews to get even close to the level of sensuality you bring.
I bow before you!