All Comments on 'Rhonda's Two Little Secrets'

nice story. he is a good guy,

And, it was well written. It seems to be the two defining qualities of your stories that I enjoy. Keep up the good work. H-

Nice job Slirpuff. This story is quite good and the second secret was disclosed finally towards the end of the story. Keep writing. You have great ability to write interesting and meaningful stories. RAG

Nice story Slirpuff. Good to see your still writing well written stories that are a good fun read as well. Thanks again. And keep the stories coming.

This started out well, with the guy not being a wimp, not allowing girls to disrespect him, etc., but it didn't deliver in the end. Nothing happened. I've enjoyed some of your stories, but I'm really getting tired of the BS stories about the army, or some situation in which nothing interesting ever happens.

and I like (generally) what you have to say. I'd probably enjoy this one. I'm afraid I had to stop reading, in sheer exasperation, though, when you laid it on that they'd been seeing each other for three months before she told him about the child. So they'd talked about what, exactly? something just grated on me there. I'll come back when I've adjusted to this disfeasability. Thanks...Mancelt.

....the rents,the only interesting characters here.Maybe this could have been developed more before posting/

Two stupid people in love. She keeps her 5 year old a secret for 3 months because she (KNOWS) he will leave as soon as he finds out she has a 5 year old. He falls in love with her and 5 year old and proposes. She tells him not to invite her parents to their wedding because they are religous zealots who hate her and have lost respect for her, but he knows better and calls the parents and invites them to the wedding. They turn him down and call her a slut that they never want to see again. It gets more complicated about her being a stripper but the fact is he and she both think they know everything and their arrogance almost kills their wedding.

60 year old George

A very enjoyable story. You always come up with interesting plots.

Several people questioned how he treated the two dates in the beginning of the story and how he handled Rhonda's past. To me there's a huge difference. The two dates totally disrepected him in front of everyone. What Rhonda did in her past before him makes little difference if all she did was be a stripper.

A nice feel good story! Prostituting and exotic dancing are pretty far apart.

And in this case her dancing is in the past. She did what she had to do. I can't falt her for that. But her parents are the whacked ones.

Thanks for writing!

I don't know why some folks can't just read a nice piece of fiction without having to over-analyze it. Personally, I thought it was a fine little tale. Thanks for having written it.

I agree, she has some trust issues, but with those parents why not. Good story, thanks.

A very well writen story that has a lot of believable characters.

The story seems real to life and is good and straight to the point.

Enough background to make it real but not too wordy

Thanks for the good read.

The only unbelievable part of the tale was the protagonist being so full of good sense! They don't seem to make to many of those.

Maybe it's just me.

I'd go further than other commentators. If she HAD prostituted herself when her parents disowned her at such a young age, in such a vulnerable state, and with no real options for supporting herself and her baby, would this have been totally unforgivable? Especially after a significant lapse of time during which she appears to have been living as an honest employee? Let's have some Christian charity.

It was bad enough when he walked out on the first girl and left her. However, to repeat that again just because his girlfriend danced with her exboyfriend was too much. Therefore, at that point I stopped reading this stupid story and gave it 1*.

I don't waste my time reading about some jealous ass.

And I mean this with all respect. I shall ignore the glaring grammatical errors because you've improved no that front so well.

The problem is this: you started the story with wet tongue/crotch syndrome. Then you brought in Rhonda. The issue with Rhonda was NOT wet tongue/crotch syndrome. It was a shifting of the basis of the plot without explanation. The lead in had nothing to do with the rest of the story so I expected different problems with Rhonda.

It would have been better served to discuss lies and secrets with previous girlfriends.

It is a quibble, but a jarring one, at least in my mind. Still, thanks for the story.

Well, you know I don't much give a damn about grammatical errors. As long as the story is good, who in the hell cares. And what we were yesterday doesn't have a fucking thing to do with who we are today. I gave it a 5.

should begin with a clean slate as possible. TK U MLJ LV NV

She wasn't a whore, slut, prostitute or any other names you come up with. She was a dancer. She was a retired dancer. So what's the problem? No problem. Have a nice life.

It was like the original intention of the story was derailed somewhere along the line. Even so, it was good.

She has already been found to be a liar by omission. How many "strippers" do nothing but stand on a stage and strip? Ever been to a strip club? They typically do have contact with the customers. The more money you spend the more they offer, a little more and you have a lap dance, a bit more and you have a blow job, ect. That is the kind of "dance" strippers do. Judge it or not, that's the way it is. If he wants to marry a whore with a kid, that is his decision.

Most strippers are just that - strippers, exotic dancers, whatever. I have met many women who have done it and none of them have ever prostituted themselves . Most of them did it for the same reason as Rhonda did - to make money to make ends meet while supporting a child, going to school, or trying to get out from under debt. Some of them liked doing it and also took jobs as nude models. But none that I know of ever gave a blowjob, hand job, or a fuck for money. No, they weren't all little angels, but they weren't whores.

I'm not saying that there aren't women who have done that, but to paint all exotic dancers with the same brush is bigoted and little-minded.

I found it odd in the end that he didn't profess his love for her. He kept asking if she prostituted herself, as if that was the condition for him marrying her. So, if she had prostituted herself would he have not married her? Not sure why that would make a difference if he loved her. She is a different person and that would have been in the past.

He didn't love her, he just wanted a convenient fuck.

I have met many strippers over the years. Just like any profession, some were sweet and just earning a living. Some were complete sluts and were only out for themselves. I would not have a problem with the kind of girl described in this story.

For all you "HOLIER THAN THOU TYPES", I quote from the scriptures, "JUDGE NOT LEST THEE BE JUDGED"!

Calm down fellow, take your meds. This is a erotic site, leave the scriptures at home.

It's a story, a fantasy. Don't understand, why all the irritations. Enjoy the story, if not, move on to another one. As always, good job, Slirpuff.

While it's possible, it is not stated explicitly that he would dump her if she had been a prostitute, but there IS a difference between stripping and prostitution and he has a right to know so that he can make an informed decision.

If a woman with one or more kids is forced to choose between something she finds personally demeaning and caring for her kids, I'd hope she picked the kids...

Likewise, the same for a man...

I've known men who considered working in fast food beneath them even if it would have put food on the table for their kids...

I've also known a woman who danced for a living and in later years actually hooked some (she had three kids)...

I'm not sure I'd ever want to find out my wife had hooked... but more because I'd worry that if our finances tanked she might do it again to keep us afloat rather than because she had PREVIOUSLY done it... on the other hand, if I found out she hooked just because she liked it... that would be a deal breaker... you should be willing to swim in filth if that's what it takes to survive, not for the fun of it.

good story, nice sequence of events, believable, nice

Hell, that's two in a row that I've enjoyed Steve; not too bad at all. Very believable & unfortunately through personal experience of friends not that uncommon theses days. This tale could have been a biography of my friends' grand daughter, however, unfortunately for her & her 2 sons, her husband was killed in a serious auto accident involving 6 other vehicles 5 years after their marriage. Total of 7 dead & 11 seriously injured. To my knowledge she never remarried. 4 ****

But did he really believe her? First she hides the fact that she has a child for what? Months while they were first dating? Then she hides ( a lie of omission is the same as lying) the facts about her being an erotic dancer. What else is she hiding? Or lying about? Or failing to tell him? There are just too many question marks to marry this woman and take on the responsibility of raising her kid. I don't think he realizes what's involved with taking on the pair of them. Seems like a daunting task better left to someone more mature than he.

I liked it. Nice to read everything worked out for Rhonda and Steve. Some women strip to support their drug addiction. Others to pay school tuition. Some to just live. Fuck the fundamentalists and do-gooders. Live and let live. Cheers! c29

And he believed a word she said? Even a dumb man would have run for the hills and thanked his lucky stars that he didn't make the mistake of marrying her. He'd never be first in her life. She'd never fully relax and she'd always have her running shoes under the bed. Bad idea.

She was understandably nervous about her past, it's caused her problems in the past, so she was afraid to trust him with whole story.

Once she did, he had enough love for her to believe her and go ahead with making a life with her and Sara.

Fuuuuuck mee man! My missus is a retired sex worker! She kept it a secret from me until last month, how I found out I was looking at sexy girls on the Internet . The hold and be blowed a picture of my wife getting fucked! It was taken when she was 19 ! I knew it was her by the birth mark ! She cried and cried I held her . Then she asked me how I felt about it? Well I had a roaring fat man! Instant turn on Man! Long story short I still love her! And I have watched all her movies with her, we have Three kids and are mine! Story is Fantastic! Love you all! GREG. OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE! OH also her Sister lives with us her Husband couldn't handle it both Girls Whores. His words BYE

I feel like the story was only half finished. The ending was disappointing.

"Well then I believe you, case closed."

Imbecile!

Doorknob,

You are a putz, wimp AND a dumbass.

Sugna,

Having been in high end strip clubs with buddies living with dancers, many of them did no extras. Especially the best looking ones. Now, one notch below the high end clubs...different story entirely.

Liked the way he dumped the two girl friends,good on you mate.But why no men film of Rhonda's new job and work mates and who looks after Sara when she is at work.

The first two girl friends deserved to be dropped. Imagine going through life not knowing when your wife's roving eye is going to find a hot guy to cheat with!! Rhonda comes across as an up front person, so why shouldn't Steve believe her and what she reveals of her past. Five stars.

Really good story. I like a man who has principles and stands for them. He got a family by waiting for the right one.

the bullshit about "Born Again Christians" is utter bigotted, ignorant nonsense.

Where is the rest of the story?.

So are you implying that people like that don't exist or did you just go full "No True Scotsman" fallacy?

Holy crap, that ending came at us at 120mph.

"You're not mad I was an exotic dancer?"

"No, let's get married." THE END.

It was a nice idea for a story and Steve's a good guy for not holding it against her the way some dudes would but there wasn't a hell of a lot going on to wrap this up. The drama after his bachelor party was here and gone in no time. Also, for someone who was so jealous he dumped his first two gfs after a dance or two, how's he going to deal with it if they ever bump into someone who recognizes her from her stripper days? Almost seemed like two different stories, one with this jealous, impatient, pretty intolerant guy obsessed with women respecting him and another with a patient, child-loving, forgiving, understanding dude who doesn't mind that tons of guys have seen his fiancee dancing and showing everything she's got.

Nice story but very awkward. I'm not sure why the summary of the relationships with Candy and Diane were even included. They didn't really reflect on the rest at all.

This is a very interesting story I am wondering if theirs more to the story..

Like if they stayed married are ?

I enjoyed reading it

Had loads of potential if the wife hadn’t ended up being a bitch and him a wimp. Also the only interesting characters in the story are the parents... 2/5

I thought it was a good story. All of it is plausible. Only bad guys are the parents, just like BACs to abandon their child and grandchild over their "Christian" rightousness.

and they all lived happily ever after. What a pretty little tale.

I Liked the way He left those 2 ex's .. My Ex was the same way until I said Him or Me ., She picked Him after 5 Months of Us dating ... She had 2 kids by hIm But He never Married Her .. And Yes She wanted Me to Marry Her .. That will never happen .

Great little story. She had to learn and allow herself to trust him.

Good story but what a clueless maroon. Guy thinks he knows best and goes against her wishes. Does he not know what born agains are like?

When you equated strippers with dirt. What a holier than thou attitude. Not everyone can be a faceless anonymous porn writer. Some people have to pay rent by any means at their disposal. How totally Trumpian of you

I don't understand men who look down on strippers

nice story, AAA+++

Good story. A little more on the ending could have made it great

I liked the story ok, but your hero has an IQ of minus 3. What a TOTAL fucking idiot. I don't really believe anyone thar stupid would have enough sense to breath. What a moron.

Everone has a past...good mother, lousy parents

Some people should never drink. Here is the poster boy for that. What an idiot.

Enjoyed the story. Thanks for your writing.

It seems that all the males in these stories are stupid. Of course, they all seem to be alcoholics.

Great story! Everybody has a past.

Decent story.

Wonder what happened to his 2 prior GFs?

true love and he handled his night out at the stripper bar and what her Dad told him so badly. A real jerk, dummy.

Great story. Well done. Rhonda's parents were jackasses.

@Anonymous "Wonder what happened to his 2 prior GFs?"

In the end, who cares? One needed to grow up, one needed to learn to respect other people, especially those important to you. .in a way, Rhonda needed to learn a similar lesson on Trust and Openness (not honesty... She was honest, just not open), but Steve thought she was worth spending the energy, time, love, and trust on to help her learn that lesson.

An oldie but a goodie, Slirpuff!

I cannot believe he did not go looking for retired persons. I also she should have been up front about her past so that she can prove, it is her past. Marriage is about being open and honest between spouses. This is a major thing to be missed especially as her picture can be found on that web site.

not a huge drama, as far as I'm concerned, but I imagine it would be a burden for a woman who's been through that and burned by some boyfriends. Good story.

Overall, I liked the story, but felt you spent too lttle time on the two of them getting back together. After what she'd already gone through due to her stint at the Top Hat, I believe her reaction to his discovery would have been far more explosive and definitely longer lasting. Still, their relationship was developed very well, and I really liked what you said about strippers being real people, not 'sluts' or prostitutes.