All Comments on 'Seduction In Bunny Pyjamas Ch. 03'

Fixing some punctuation errors and sentence structures would make it read better, but it's fun and sweet. Looking forward to the conclusion.

As someone pointed out in commenting on parts one and two, your dialogue punctuation is not quite right (need commas), but the story is great. Unrequited love finally returned. I like that theme. I am looking forward to chapter four.