All Comments on 'I Don't Want A Divorce'

and abuse... This couple has big problems!!!

A case of dumb and dumber, especially if the husband doesn't kick her ass out. No one could be as stupid as the wife. Sorry just didn't like the story or the characters.

NO! No! No!

The worst of both worlds - a cheating, slut wife and a wimpy, cuck husband! Next time why don't you have her "do" their dog and cat. Seriously warped individuals in a bad story!

instant divorce

dont really know what to say....just a bad piece of writing....

Yuck, that was a big turn off, you got some problems, dude.

... um, oh my God... that was the... forget it. You wouldn't understand.

The only thing more silly then you're constant use of the word silly, was the fact that you thought you could make this story work. It was just dumb. There was nothing erotic about it. Even the most closed minded woman wouldn't mind doing different positions or going to bed naked, did this guy marry a nun or something? Better luck next time

A bit, well more than just a bit, silly, but a cute fun story. Reminds me of a singer's get them laughing, throw-away song; "Oh Lord won't you buy me a Mercedes Benz . . . " No sense reading deep, just chuckle and enjoy.

Not a bad story - it proves that retards can write

Come on author, 5th graders write better than this.

... hoping that the third packet opened contained divorce papers and a "F*** You!" note?

Yeah, what another commenter said; he didn't say he wanted her to turn into a absolute slut whore; he just wanted some variety w/ her. Another wimpy husband, slut wife story, ho hum. The only good ending to this story would be to go w/ that divorce that was his first intention & move on.

To save the marriage she will do to others what she refused to do to her husband. Women might not be logical but that is just plain stupid

Why bother putting this scenario on paper...no point, not erotic, no story, just trash. First time I ever wrote a negative review....

Bill from NJ

Pure total crap--the slut whore bitch whoud be a goner now --out the door in the street----DIVORCE--now that is not silly---writer you are a little silly

That was a good one, a good joke I mean, you can't seriously think anyone with balls or any pride would do this? or let this happen? even as a fantasy it is scary.

Hubbie gave up his "man card" right after he got married. He wants a little spice in his marriage and the slut wife says that "it is silly". Then she whores out on the internet! WTF - dump this slut, don't go home, see a lawyer, then go to the doctor and get checked for STD's. This story is beyond stupid!

How could she possibly go from frigid to swinging momma?? Maybe after she opens up to hubby then they expand to parties... Too far afield, revise, republish.

Your living proof that even a fool can write a story,

Just move out.

As another reader remarked, from frigid prude to gangbanging slut - yeah, right. <br><p>

The big problem with a story like this is that it is so implausible that the reader is never going to have the suspension of disbelief that makes a story work.

This story is total bullshit. But if this would happen the only logical conclusion would be: Divorce the bitch with the speed of light.

Regards, Umberto

I agree with everything that's been said about this absurd sroty. The man should now hire her out & at least get some money before the divorce.

as they do you, dear author...Mancelt ;-)

Silly

If you butthurt faggots dont like the contents of "Loving Wives" stories, then don't read such stories. I absolutely cannot understand how people fail to achieve said conclusion. Ranting about divorce or women doing unacceptable things in this category is absolutely the same as chastizing gay people on the "Gay Male" category.

that I read the whole story. How silly of me. If I were the husband, I would send her my own envelope with a note saying : "I do, and this isn't silly".

She wouldn't have sex with him, yet having sex with strangers saves their marriage? I'm not getting upset about infidelity or anything else. I think I just lost any logical connection here between what the husband wanted and what the wife did.

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He wanted her to be less of a prude so she became a total cheating slut????? Go back to whatever you were smoking and/or drinking and leave the computer alone.

OK. I get it. She doesn't care about doing the things that turn him on. But when he starts to talk about divorce, she pulls out all the stops. She shows him that she will be his total whore, and do anything he dreams of.

BUT.....

She went too far, and not taking his call after the first session is fucking stupid on her part. He was not in charge, and had no way of altering what she was doing, and if she is trying to please her man, she fucked up big time.

No sex with husband, but then sex with strangers. Whow. What a dumb story!

who read the hot wife stories and then cannot help themselves in rushing to attack the story. If your wife cheated on you then it is most likely because you were lousy in bed and she had to find a real man somewhere. The husband in this story showed his wife some websites where wives were hot so he obviously wanted her to do those kinds of things and if both partners in a relationship want to do something with other people then it is OK. A wife is not a piece of property unless you are a retarded moron who is alone for that reason

Well I kept hoping that something interesting would happen and that

there would be both an explanation and a special moment.... But it was truly unexplainable to me perhaps other people know why he got a hard-on at the end of the story.... I was expecting him to send a process server..

Who need enemies with a braindead wife. Divorce her and park her ass to the curb. Run as fast as you away from her.

I didn't really like the turn at the end where the wife claims to be just "getting ready." However, your characters are believable, the conversations among them easy to follow, and the story was entertaining. Keep 'em coming, please. ikj

that maybe we can assume she has been cheating all along and using her husband's ideas to keep ALL of her boy friends happy. She wants to keep the husband to pay for her cheating. Certainly easier than going through a divorce. They both seem braindead: he for putting up with it for so long and she for her obviously destructive attitude and unloving behavior before the "incidents" and after. If there is a part two, my vote is that an Angel come down, touches him on the forhead and makes him see the truth of their monumentally disfuctional relationship. Why are so many readers turned on by male humiliation? I also wonder if this is more a woman's fantasy than a mans. Ah, well. Probably no way to know.

I am so tired of the stupid cuck stories. Wish they had their own damn category. Please, authors, do us the courtesy of labeling them in the title or description so those of us who understand the consequences of cheating (disease, divorce, fucked up kids, in some cases retribution and jail) can avoid them.

I guess I must have missed where he told her he wanted her do fuck 8 other men, treating them to everything she refused to give to her husband. My response to her first show would have been divorce. Bad enough she isn't putting out for him but to be giving it away to strangers is unacceptable.

Too BAD Your getting one anyway! I'm just here to pack the rest of my belongings and then I'm outa here!! You can keep the house and the payments! Have a nice life you SILLY cunt.

This is like one of those jokes where an American, a Canadian and an Irishman meet in a bar, and each one has a bigger story to tell than the last.

Unfortunately, there's no punchline here, and the wife's sudden change of heart isn't really explained - other than the threat of divorce. I suppose that might induce her to be nicer to the husband, but 'my husband threatened to divorce me, so I made a film of myself, screwing 8 men over three nights, and sent it to him' isn't what one would normally expect to occur to her!

that you stop writing. Pick another hobby. Needlepoint, maybe.

....(even though I skimmed most of it) even stepping in this puddle than the author is for leaving it. It's on me author, o.k.? No need to spam me. IT'S ALL MY FAULT!!!! YOU DID NOTHING WRONG!!! I'm the one that read it.

Even the famous JPB could not write one this bad and stupid if he tried.

I can't believe I read the whole story! There was no love involved. This was not a story but some sad attempt to . . . hell I don't know what you were trying to say. It wasn't sexy, didn't excite, and illustrated how moranic a man (and wife) can be when the think they are trying to save their marriage. I suggest you do crossword puzzels!

I'm sure the author is LAUGHING HIS ASS OFF since we managed to troll us so good. Well , at least this way cuckold authors are making us all the more possesive of our women.

Thats a worst story I have read on this website, no loving wife can fuck the way it has been written here.

A minus five marks from my side

If the success of a story is measured by the number of responses, this one should be labeled as successful. However, when taking into account that nearly all are negative, one has to wonder how success really is measured.

How about a ball transplant, cause your's don't fucking work.

I guess being an old guy allows the mind to wander just a little more freely. I loved the perception and line you took. Why so many expect such momentary act of charities to be such a lonesome act upon itself slays me. Nicely done, great direction! By the way, so you are addicted to the tastes of five guys come dumpings now, huh?

You lost the plot dear writer. This could have been a good story but you fucked it up with you unrealistic scenarios. Well this has been one of the worse reads in a long time. I know you can write but how about learning to write Quality stories. You lost good support from us. You must have some unspoken message for us with this kind of shit story- unfortunately I am not psychic so the message is lost.

Hell, I thought it was pretty creative, with the web cam fun. Good story. Dont know why people are so rude about fantasy porn stories. Thanks for writing dude!

I thought you had to be over 18 to come here, does that not apply to the writers too? This is way to stupid to anything else than the fantasy of a spott faced 12 year old

he just wanted to spice up their sex life. How did translate that to I can fuck many other men for him. The bitch should have been out on her ear. Thats more like begging for a divorce. This is nothing like what he mentioned in the first two or three paragraphs of this story. Not even hot as far as I am concerned.

silly. fullstop.

One of the worse reads ever, I want to be paid for reading this, as it wasted my time, so pay me now!

loved it

What a piece of crap. It seems to me that the wife is a lot more experienced than silly hubby thought. She was doing everything with them and suddenly it wasn't silly. Why didn't she do that with him there? Funny how she was able to deep throat a monster dick with no problems and have gangbangs and now things aren't so silly because she's doing it for the man she loves who never asked for her to be a human slut exhibit. Yeah, she loves him from a distance and now has to give up and share all the fun things with her husband before he realizes she's fucking the entire state already. Yeah, great storytelling abilities...

That was stupid!!!!!!!!

I think you won the lit award for most negative comments received on a single story. I can see you worked really hard on receiving such a coveted award. ML

I read a story a while back that was total tongue in cheek style, about a a couple who wound up getting divorced because she refused to cuckold the husband and wanted his children rather than from his buddy or her boss like he wanted. Because that's what all his friends and family were doing and it was expected of him, but the wife had too much respect and love to go through with it. Not quite the same but close enough that it reminded me, and now I can't think of the author or what site it was on.

There's a lonely village desperately looking for their idiot

You see what happens when you don't eat your vegetables? You get Kwasihorkor or some evil disease that rots your brain and turns you into an idiot and then you wind up posting stories like this

Screw the nagative comments. I thought this story was hot.

The bitch claims she doesn't want a divorce, but then won't do anything to please the hubby and instead goes to do gangbangs.

Where I come from such a bitch would be beaten and then stoned to death.

Written by a mentally challenged cretin ! Amazing that sick rejects like this "writer" are allowed to walk freely !!

People like him should be locked in asylum somewhere !!

Let's see, she could have

A- put effort into her husband, had great sex with him and kept him

B - cheat on him, show him video of the whole thing

She chose B, proving that he should now divorce her for not only not putting any effort into the marriage, but also for being too stupid to be alive.

So did MattM or wantswhiteboys or bonnietaylor decide to post under another alias [again]? As they seldom say: Stupid is as Stupid does! Oh, and yes this was pure crap as usual.

STORY!!!!!!

The author is a good writer but the story is too weird and too improbable so I rated it 1*.

However, I must admit a large number of people commented. Perhaps the the author is a type of troll and writes this stuff to upset readers to get their comments.

If I read this correctly, the hubby traded in a good wife for a slut. This would make sense if he plans to become a pimp and rent that ass out, but otherwise it's a little odd.

talking it over with hubby. I'm sorry but this was really stupid.

Title says it all.

Until I abruptly reached the end. Too bad, took what might have been a "4" & made it a "2". Really liked the majority of the story.

Hard to glean the wife's real motivation to cheat. This story begs for a sequel to address what really happened; even if just to say that she is a complete nut job.

What the HELL was that???

Cheating bitch deserves to be kicked out of his life Pronto!

He should have walked in the bedroom ready to shoot and kill. What a cuck wimp. This tale disgusted me. DO NOT READ THIS CRAP. STAY AWAY.

HA HA HA

Great story, thanks for this story. I give this story full score.

I thought I said don't read this tale.

PAY ATTENTION

I'm done for the night.

HA

his cornhole rudely buggered, he smoked a fat cock, betrayed!

Just how stupid can you get, thinking you could save a marriage by rubbing adultery right into husbands face? I´d kill the slut...no worries there...

I felt the story had the ability to present a richly developing plot line. However, instead of investigating the many rich courses the story could have taken you chose to concoct some mindless dribble that neither fit nor helped to expand the basic plot conflict. Thus it wound up being just another story about a mindless wimp who pumps his tallywacker to a parade of other men penetrating and using his wife.

She willingly does for others what she begrudgingly does only once for him and then only does for him half heartedly. He needs to find a wife and lover that is more compatible. Kick the bitch to the curb and let her do her crap with some other asshole.

Only a certified idiot would write such a piece of garbage.

not a normal reaction to a cheating wife

SO many questions? Did he ever ask her why she thought everything was "silly"? Why did he stick around for 5 years? And no man I know would have done anything but open all three envelopes the minute he found them. And after he recorded her actions on his computer, instead of going home to the cheating slut, he should have headed to the divorce attorney. Having him dive into her cheating cunt and exposing himself to every disease known to man was just the icing on top of this cake of idiocy. Even for fiction this was ridiculously bad.

he needs a head doctor badly

So the guy wants her to be more adventurous with HIM and she decides to cuckold him multiple times and BAREBACK?!?! Divorce her slutty ass and RUN from that crazy bitch! What would she do next? And who other than a wimp would want her?

And the others shouldn't write about them. Just another WACC writer

Might be in the running for one of the most disgusting stories. And a little stupid, frankly. If you've heard the expression "a fool and their money are soon parted," well, I keep wondering how the fool and the money got together in the first place. In such a story, someone so abysmally stupid as to threaten their wife with divorce if they DON'T cheat on them, topped off by a wife who ACCEPTS that bullshit....well, fuck, I lost 20 i.q. points just reading about it. Here's hoping the author has a day job.

It looked like a cheating slut. Nothing more, nothing less. First off, her response - it seems silly seemed - silly. She did everything he asked just one or two times and then what happened ? She just went back to missionary position, vanilla sex? You never expanded on her behavior. Secondly, I know of no men or women for that matter, that wouldn't have opened all three envelopes immediately. After seeing her first "show" (which I assume he recorded) why didn't he continue to try and reach her on the phone? And why did he go straight home after he landed? His marriage was over. Stops at the bank and his attorneys would have been in order. And your conclusion that he would have dived into the cesspool of disease that was her pussy was ludicrous. Most men never go home, some men go home and throw her out or pack their things in leave. No man goes in and has sex with the bat shit crazy woman. Even for fiction this was a disgusting ending to a poor story. Just plain awful.

Didn't get it, didn't like it.

Sorry

BDEarth

I can't believe I actually read this crap before. Shit this sequel better get this image out of my mind.

I know there is a sequel from FTDS, but this story is unsalvageable.

Agree with @Drbeamer3333, but believe that FTDS saved it with a lot of humor...

Hate wimp tales

mmmm,..I think some where I lost the point of what the story was all about and the point it was trying to convey ! ! ! ! !

What? As in making shutters for the windows?