All Comments on 'Crossing Moon Ch. 13'

After a pretty slow build up, its all happening now.... !

'priority' should be 'priorities' and brides jitters are called pre-wedding jitters.

WHy .. why? how is this mess going to be fixed? don't leave us hanging please my heart breaking for them .. :(

Great build-up, nice suspense, bombastic climax and an exciting cliff-hangar. You did GREAT!

It's a nice change for a while to see a writer with enough courage to avoid a last minute safe or "deus ex machina" intervention.

Keep going - but please a little bit faster. You'r killing me! ;-)

Thank you so much for coming back to this story, I so love it!!! Am so happy to see it again, Please keep writing.

Wow that was certainly worth the wait. Please continue with more soon.

this is wonderful keep it up!

WHY!?!?!?! I hope I read this wrong!! It's not fair!!!!! Alven and Carrie all the way!!! Why does history seem to repeat itself!?!?!?!? WHY?!?!?!?! WHY!?!?!?!?

I'm ranting cause I love this story. lol XD

How and when does Sam Nyca die???????? I know I have more to read but HOW could you get Carrie out of the woods, just to have her mate with Nyca anyway????