All Comments on 'Absolute Magic'

awesome story, and a wonderful first beginning, i do hope you update soon.

I hope you can post more, soon. This is a welcome and different start for a nonhuman story.

i love the start of this story, its unique in own way, keep up the good work.

and this was a wonderful start. I know I'll be looking for more. Thanks for posting!

Very strong beginning and I can't wait to see where you take these two!

Yes, young lady, please continue. I liked the story and your imagination. It seemed well plotted as well scripted. Thank you for a pleasant interlude.

I really liked the story not a typical vampire story. I agree with the other comments keep up the good work

I usually don't read nonhuman, but this one peaked my interest. Way to go, love the fact that you are taking the time to develop characters. Don't stop now.

Hey just letting you know that I liked the beginning of this story and can't wait to see where it goes.

I like it:) She seems a cool witch and Dmitri is promising:)

Great start! I wish it would have been a little longer though lol. I love nonhuman stories, and I will definitely be looking for more chapters...hopefully soon? (hint-hint :) )

For your first time it's awesome! Keep it up!

I'm looking forward to finding out more about the witches, vampires and the world they live in. I wonder what Dmitri will be like. I'm curious. Good job! Looking forward to the next chapter.

I love the beginning of this story. I can't wait to read the rest.

it was great! i hope you write more.:)

After all we don't have one everyday in real life either . I think this is off to a great start .........and romance is always appreciated if well done .......the editing so far seems better than most ..I (a Wiccan) am looking forward to much more of this story .........and more humanizing witch stories in general ....

Stephen J sjhallahan@verizon.net (I have trouble registering on this site due I suspect to the DOT NET email )

very nice beginning. No sex is good as they are meeting. Sometime too much sex can be mundane. Keep writing, please :) Lilith Skyjumper

You need to change the tags. Only gave you one star.