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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/28/11

you need to proof read!

I could barely tell what you were trying to write with your numerous grammatical errors.

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by Anonymous07/20/13

the idea is good but you stop short of making a story

Plump women are sexy and they love to fuck (my perception)!
The story was more like a report for the head office than an erotic story.
However i read it because i crave plump women.
3 stars - keep on writing.

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