All Comments on 'A Different Road Trip'

For erotica it is better than average but, for my taste, not the best.

Usually in the 'cop screws my Sweetie' tales, someone has committed a minor crime, like speeding. Not in this one, which removes a layer of coercion! There are some unnecessary aspects to the story which reduce the 'what may happen? Will she or won't she?' tension! Flashing the paperboy is one of these!

The sex was fairly bland and sparsely described ... Geez!

3*

It got me turned on and mad at the same time,

In other words you accepted you were gay and at the same time didnt like being disrespected as a human. Suck to be a writer with your issues Gomer.

Stupid story from start to finish. Glad you career was a short one.