by Galloglaich
It might have been a bit short but it was still good. I can't wait for the next chapter :)
This is one of the best and most interesting stories I've read here! All chapters are great. Can't wait for the next one!
It was good and still one of the best stories on here... but you've been killing it with all these random blows from nowhere. This is making the story far less consistent and dependent upon original inertia.
I hope that you'll wrap it all coherently soon.
I actully began this story when you first started it, but I fell off shortly after. I have just recently started back up again and I'm very glad I did. This is good stuff!
i have been reading your stories from the beginning and by far they are the best stories i've ever read, but the main thing is that you are divverting from your main story by introducing new characters and crating new scenarios.
i say all the best for your next chapter but try to stick to the topic.
i'll be waiting for our next presentation
I wouldn't worry about the new characters making the plot drag or jump around. There are those of us who enjoy your writing style and are in no hurry for the end to come prematurely (pun intended). Looking forward to the next.