All Comments on 'The Apartment'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Nice plot

But, get an editor, as the English is off-putting

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
wannabe writer

why do you wannabes post stories without going through a good editor way to many goofs wrong words,extra words and missing words this was a good first draft and that is all do a rewrite and go through a good editor and never post a story without going through an editor first again

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Don't stop now

Please ignore the grammatical comments and concentrate on what's important, the story line. This is a great story line and I hope that you keep it up (Also Connections Ch 4). Sometimes in reading the comments on this site it seems like many readers are English teachers because they are so critical of grammatic errors even to the detriment of comments on a great story. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
DUH

This site is for everyone so what's up with the "Wannabe Writer" comment. F.Y.I most of the posters on this sight have barely written. I do agree that an editor would make the story flow better but there is no need to be rude about it. On a separate note good job and I hope to see more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Ignore the perfectionists

I have seen far worse in the grammer and english department.I was able to read and understand this story quite easily.We are here for entertainment after all!!! So please continue this great story line and the rest will follow with practice.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 14 years ago
An interesting storyline

A fast moving tight story so far.

I hope to see more soon.

Thanks

loved4eternityloved4eternityalmost 14 years agoAuthor
Reasons

Hey everyone! I just thought I would try and explain something that I've gotten a few comments about; the whole editor thing. I don't always have that much time to be writing so when I do get to I write quickly to try and get it out there. I understand it can be frustrating to be reading a story and be like "WHAT THE HELL DOES THAT SAY!" The reason I don't use an editor though is simply because it takes longer to post the story. I would rather it have a few errors then for it to take a few more days. Maybe eventually I will find an editor but for now I think I'll stick with myself. If any one of my stories is ever to difficult or annoying to read please feel free to comment about it and I will gladly go back through more thoroughly and fix it. Thank you for all your comments and support! :)

Socially_IneptSocially_Ineptalmost 14 years ago
Don't worry about it.

This was a real nice story. I can't wait for the next one to come out. As for mistakes, don't worry too much about it. Everyone makes them.

northlandkiwinorthlandkiwialmost 14 years ago
great start :)

I didn't notice any grammatical errors , perhaps I was so involved with the story and not focusing on being the spelling police ! keep the story going plz

5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
stupid writer

being in a rush is never good show some pride in your work and respect for the readers and USE A GOOD EDITOR never post a story with out going through a good editor first doing so shows the readers that you don't care about your story or them so smarten up and always use a good editor

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

no sex but a GREAT story I really enjoyed it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
delete and rewrite ALL stories

a good writer always has the readers enjoyment in mind BEFORE posting a story and will never post astory that is not ready and has not been edited. delete all stories and run them through a good editor then they might be worth trying to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
waste of time

no beginning and no end just a poorly written middle that never should have been posted. thanks for wasting my time and yours, glad you stopped writing you suck at it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
annony has the same dribble and crying day after day week after week month

after month and he she it IT has the balls to say this story was boring! Eat it annolny your the fucking asshole on here. Great story 5!

OlebillOlebillover 7 years ago
What

Where's the rest.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
What apartment

If that's what you call a story , it's best you go back to the 11th grade and start you're life over again . Good luck !

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