All Comments on 'Absolute Magic Ch. 02'

Good story but wished there was more.

Awesome. More please.

An excellent start. A nice set of characters so far and the cauldron is coming up to simmer nicely.

great story, but the chapters need to be longer :)

I wonder when Raven will come to her senses? She is now overloaded with a hot guy but what she will do when she realized she is just a new sex toy? She seems strong and indipendent witch that will chose to be free rather than stay as a lover to the Prince:) And I really liked her in her previous black make up and clothes:)

i really enjoy the feel of this story. The way her emotions are being used, the feelings of them going every direction at once. So much to digest at once. I also like your writting style, and i look forward to more.

thank you,

Bainsidhe

dimitri is about to get his world rocked i bet, and momma is going to be pissed. which is great, hope he gives raven some confidence and she gives him a bit of humility and they will be great, hope to see more soon

this is a very interesting story and i like where it is going look forward to more. thank you for sharing Mechmanas

I enjoyed the story. I look forward to the next installment.

I want more! Please try to make the chapters longer. It seems when the story really starts getting very very interesting... it ends... so please make it longer! But i am really enjoying reading this story. I love it so much!! I cant wait for the next chapter.

Hi, when will the next part be out??? Dying to read it. Please update soon.....

Need more ASAP!!! this was great!!!!!!!!

Good job, love this story line. Don't normally read this genre, but I keep looking for your stories. Thanks!!!

Keep it coming, love it so far.

what a wounderful storie

Great story, Upload ASAP.

can't wait for more! Raven seems so cute in this story but I do hope she starts to slowly find her strength.

Love it! Keep it coming:)

Love the story. But what happens? Does Catalina get her way? Or Dmitir and Raven explore thier attraction?

Dmitri & Raven will make a great couple. What happens next, do they get together or does his mother prevents it. What happens raven now? Need to know ASAP!! POST NEW CHAPTERS SOON.

this is a really great story so far, and completely original! please continue with this story.

I keep checking back for a new chapter!! .....hint hint...

Please keep writing as this is one of the best stories I've read so far and I would hate for it to be abandoned.

I love ur story so far, so keep writing!!!

I think you have some writer's blocks for not posting your great story, since there are so many compliments and requests but you still not responding. I do hope you get your muse back since there is nothing compare to unfinish good story.

Great start I am hooked!!

is amazing. You put the normal vampire story into a new perspective

Loved it! More please!

wondering when chapter 3 will be added im enjoying this story so far

Lets hope there will be another chapter,seems like so many go unfinished on here.It was good,what there was of it.

chapter 3 please

Please and Thank You (^_^)

I like the story thus far, and will be awaiting for the next chapter, but just throwing this out there, are you planning to make several chapters?

Everytime I get my teeth into a good story...*insert dramatic sigh here* I hate waiting so please hurry with their story, I can't wait to read more since I am a witch as well!! Wish I could find a hunky vamp prince like this hehehe. Next chapter soon please and make it a longer one!! K fankies =^_^=

this is a good storie most stories just have sex but you added a storie back ground. keep going it is good.

There is more to come. This was a great start, I read right thru the first two chapters and am hopeful that more is on the way. The story really grabbed my interest. Great job!

I keep coming back to see if there has been an addition to this story but my hopes are alwas in vain. Please please please continue it soon.

xx

I like both chapters so far. I appreciate the fact that you did not let them jump into bed immediately since the plot builds the sensuality. i did wonder about Lilith but quite honestly his mom is the one that has me completely intrigued and Iara sounds like a hoot. Keep writing, the story is pretty awesome!

~F.

You must continue the story, i am hooked! i love the story behind it, not just sex. Please hurry and add more to this wonderful story! :)

It would be awesome if you could keep going with this story... please?

The possibilities with this story are endlessly intriguing.

I absolutly LOVE this story so far, I've been checking back to see if there's another chapter, but to no avail. Please continue this .!

You have the beginnings of a fantastic story. I hope you'll keep it up.

I love this but hurry please!!!!

The basis of this story has come to fruition, and has given itself a solid sensual base on which to thrive and flourish itself. So now please continue your exquisite story in ravishing detail; we are all waiting for your next installment in this talented tale of Dark and delicious delight.

more more more!!...Please? Loving the story. Keep up the good work!!

From the first para you had me hooked. Loved both chapters. Please give us more.

Iam jealous, what next

Please its such an intriguing Story....

Next chapter plz..

I wonder what comes next .........don't keep us on this side of the pond waiting ....

Stephen J

LOVED it!!!!!

Going on three yrs with no updates. Guess it's another good story buried in with all the others left unfinished.

im as patient as they come but when it comes to things like this I simply cant wait! I await eagerly for the next chapters to follow this :) I hope you haven't given this story up

I've spent the entire day, day dreaming about this story in various ways, all taking place in the vividly wonderful world this story creates. I would absolutely LOVE to read more. If there was an entire book, that would be a dream come true and I would buy in a heart beat. And I don't read books very often (hard to find what I like I guess). I don't know how much hope I should have since it's been 4 years since the last post, but alas, I will check back often for the continuation of this magical experience. You truly are talented writer with a wonderful imagination.

It's been just over 4 years now. Are you planning on writing chapter 2 or what? Seems to me it has gone the same way as many others here on Lit. RIP!

Some other stories unfinished:-

An Immortal Heart, Wolf at Heart, Keeper and Key,

Redemption, The Party, Slave Academy (Sequel),

Lilliana, The Prince, The Mark,

A Wolf's Tail, Zoe, The Gathering,

Red under the Moon, Bella's Beast, Claiming Lily,

Under Centaurian Protection, At Odds, Taken in Battle.

Plus many, many more. All these stories are brilliant and it's sad that they will never get finished. Oh well, at least we've still got The Rebellious Slave and The Last Tritan.

It's a shame you have not continued with this story. I make an effort every week to check to see if there is any update. It would have been nice to read a chapter 3, but I don't think it will ever happen now, as too much time has passed.

I guess life and work just took up too much of your time for you to carry on writing. I hope what you are doing now is worth it, and makes you happy. As for me? I'll check in once every 6 months. If we still haven't heard anything by this time next year, I am going to delete this story from my favourites list. No point in keeping it if you're never going to finish it.

I love where this story is going please continue...😋😋😋😋

This is going to be one of my favorites. I can already tell.

I really hope you continue, I already love the story so far!!

Please oh please continue with your story. The story plot has a good beginning but because of the two chapters, it leaves you hanging. Please continue writing this series.

2021 and I checked if ever you’ve updated. Dang I really love the story huhu so sad.