All Comments on 'Cynthia's Submission Ch. 04'

The story is continuing nicely - I wonder what Sage has planned for Cynthia tomorrow? I would like to see Sage extending her control over Cynthia at school, but also at her home...

I am eagerly waiting for more...

both this and the school grounding one...

need more to turn the sub slut to a whore, earn some money from some bikers maybe and also make her a stripper out of town..

humiliate her and use her.

Very much enjoying the story. The image of Cynthia standing naked outside her school sticks in my head and I hope to have more images from you like that one.

A nice touch using the permanent markers. Do you have any more ideas about body graffiti. How about making the nipples more visible with red marker?

Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next installment.

I found this sizzling hot though I have no similar experience - Jade

As unrealistic as this story is, it's a fantasy and is white-hot. Can't wait to read what happens next.