All Comments on 'Nightmare to Fantasy'

good start hope to see more of this story line, need to know why hit bit her earlier and what he wants

it's a good start, i'm interested to see how you develop it. a few grammer mistakes but pretty good overall.

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This story is great. Please continue it. I can't wait for the rest of the story. I only noticed one grammar problem. Your hes and shes get mixed up sometimes. A little more proof reading will quickly solve that problem. Your story line is awesome, it sucked me right in.