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roadbirdroadbirdalmost 14 years ago
well if she dont

then she can always have an accfident on the river cant she...as they say ...you can have a friend ...but always remeber a nigger is not a person...and an animal does not have any morals...if i knew my wife had fucked a blk man...and we had a hobby like that ...even if that blk man was supposed to be a friend ...and the woman was my wife...well she would drown...and if possible id have dear ole ben with us to drown in the same hole of water...the bitch would die with her nigger

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Ok roadbird say by by to lit.

you are about

to get banned.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Thats Why You Don't Marry Sluts.

And if you got a nigger for a friend, you don't have a friend that wouldn't fuck you over, not my idea of a friend. If husband keeps the wife and the nigger after this, well, he's not much of a man than is he.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
black cock

black cock is awesome and I hope he knocks her up with his black seed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Having grown up..

in such a rich country with worldwide influence, why are so many Americans illiterate? - as well as being sexist, misogynist, racist, insular and ignorant.

fregenfregenalmost 14 years ago
Pandora's Box

Ignore it and it will go away? The rules of the game were just changed. Paul is certainly aware of what happened. A marriage altering event. And Liz admits to herself at the end that she will most likely cheat again <P>

So they...just don't talk about it? Sounds like Liz will very shortly be with Ben again. Unless Paul is into sharing this marriage will soon be over. A marriage and a friendship destroyed. Too bad.<P>

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
She gots to have it

and as for these chumps who say that their wife wouldn't, think again. Stick your females in a sleeping bag with a well hung brother and I guarantee you'll be looking through the window of the newborn section of the hospital in 9 months. Get over it. Keep working, pay the rent and keep them females warm and well fed and we'll take care of the rest.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Erotica Uncovered

Innocent enough, they did what they would and should do in real life to survive, get naked and cuddle for warmth. The fact that Ben was black would have no real difference at first and even 2 whites would get aroused, they were young, senuous and sensitive to the touch.

So what is different? Nothing at first until he was able to get into her a little wider and deeper, the normal aroused erotic state would have just been passed and euphoria sets in. During the second and third time, mentally conscious, everything about their conduct would come into play; ie: cheating, the thrill of forbidden adultery and yes - crossing the color line...thrills and orgasms.

So...what do you think is going to happen. She STILL loves her husband (probably always will), he quietly isn't stupid, they are all still friends and two of them are trying to resist the thrill and sexual feelings they enjoyed...WELL...you figure it out...

2nd Chapter???

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
One Beer

Nice story and we all know this isn't the end for Liz and Ben. Come on. They each had only one beer and nobody ever stops at having just the one even though they say so. Looking forward to these two getting together for just "one more drink". Maybe Ben starts asking some of those beautiful women at

work to have a drink with him. Does Liz invite another friend or associate over for a cold one. You write and I'll read em hammertime. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
I enjoyed the story

Please continue he story of Ben and Liz it was hot and very erotic

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Why would Roadbird be banned?

The truth is that the story is about a black man and a white married woman having sex. The wife loves it, the blackman loves it, the husband knows the wife loved it and will go back again and again for sex with the black friend and won't do anything about it, it is obvious to anyone that the wife cares nothing for her husband, if so why didn't she tell the husband what happened? and what she is planning on doing in the future with the black friend? Swinging couples I understand, but one sided swinging? that doesn't make sense, swinging marriages should always be equal otherwise get divorced and be single.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
beginning of the end

Liz knows that she will want Ben again and again and it won't stop until Paul catching them or she becomes pregnant by Ben. It is the beginning of the end of a good relationship which started from a unfortunate incident. The more Liz received from Ben the more she wanted his love and now there is no stopping them. The only good thing is that Liz and Paul don't have any kids so the breakup will only hurt Paul. Nicely written.

lcc_1949lcc_1949almost 14 years ago
What Now

Has a good marriage really gone down the tubes? It was good hot sex, but what about Paul? Wife and Best Friend....and she wants it again. Stuff happens, and everyone can fall...once, but to go on and on is the ultimate betrayal by both of them. Too Sad!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Atleast she knows

She knows she will be spreading it again for the best friend and screw the hubby over. Got to love best friends!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
you want interacial?

Have the next chapter the hubby fucking two twin japanese girls and we call it even. Until then , 1 star for you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Part 2 to this story?

It may be a bit of a stretch for the imagination but the premise was great. I think a part 2 is in order!

readywreadywabout 12 years ago
great story!

I thought it was very hot, very well done! ignore the jerk who's whining about the wife cheating, if he didn't love it, he wouldn't read it! :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
How do you call 10 million niggers on the bottom of the sea.

A: Great fortune!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
horrible grammar

A good premise but its almost ruined by spelling mistakes and poor grammar.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
You expect grammar,punctuation and spelling from illiterate nigger ??

Bah ! "1*" !!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
She won't have to be faithful

because she won't be married after the baby comes

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Good story but........

I feel that you are so busy trying to pump out stories that you never bother to proof read them. Spellings and even wrong words everywhere.

It takes the excitement out of the story trying to determine what word you actually meant.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
great story.....terrible editing

you have so many incorrect words that it is distracting.....and detracting from your work. Proof read before submitting. PLEASE.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

"It was too much for him as he unloaded his juice deep in her hot pussy. "

And the bi-racial child ended the marriage and the friendship.

I hope Pete found a real wife and Liz enjoyed the entire rest of the team.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great story!! OH guess what? You just proof read the story,so what's the problem? It sounds to me that they were both happy to have survived. So they fucked a number of times. She liked his big cock and he said her pussy was tight, so they didn't worry about her getting pregnant.

Anyway I don't think Pete will notice there are a few pieces missing.ha ha

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

why do a lot of the previous comments assume that she isn't protected?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Okay, it seems obvious that while he doesn’t know details, he’s fully aware that Liz and Ben fucked. In my mind the next time Ben is over for a backyard BBQ, Liz comes out of the house to find Paul and Ben sitting there naked, grinning at her, and Paul tells her she’s overdressed. The rest I’ll leave to the imagination.

timrivtimrivover 1 year ago

Two weeks later she felt sick took a test found she was pregnant with a black baby. She and Paul divorced and she married Ben. Had three kids by him. Paul and Ben stayed friends and he was the kids godfather.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Friendsbip only goes so far.... After the divorce Paul refused to ever see or speak Ben or Liz ever again. And neither did her parents.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Liked it but should have more sex. How about part to. Maybe with both of them doing Liz?

AnonymousAnonymous11 days ago

Good Story. When my wife and I were younger as we are in our 60’s now Mary was and still is very attractive. She had sexual relations with 2 of my black friends one of them is who we got our pot from.I was working the 3rd shift at the time. Johnny G came over one night just to keep Mary company and ended up fucking her after that it became a regular thing and my other black friend joined in.That was when we were in our 20’s.

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